LorienRenard
Little seven sin fox
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Hi there, author here. I won't drop the novel, just that sometimes I get so busy that I don't have the time do translate my job. By the way, sorry by that, I am Brasilian, then I have to translate the novel after write to post here, Kin is a boy and Gin is a girl. That is lost because of the translation. Here in Brasil we call them (irmãos) like a genderless word, but when I translate to English it goes like (brothers) that means the same to us. I just gave up on correct every error on the novel, it's up to 100 thousand words and I have at least the double already wrote to translate and upload here. I hope you enjoy the novel, I really like to write it ;)
When I say that it is a feminine writing is like the words are curly and round, just the way we have to say this here in Brasil. it's hard to translate some expressions, hope you enjoy
fixed, thanks!
fixed, thanks!
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Thanks by the tip, I really hadn't any clue about that, none of the readers have talk about it
Sorry guy, I'm brazilian, when I translate my novel to english some words ar going to the wrong translation. Because brothers and siblings have the same translation to us. Just keep updating those errors so that I can fix it, hope you enjoy the novel ;)
thanks, fixed
You are taking this world like the Earth were the people gets mature by age. This world is a cultivation world, were even the rich people can reach some more life span. That way neither everyone gets mature aging, some 'children' of some clans and races even reach the age of hundreds years acting childish. Hope you enjoy today chapter
I was reading your comments. Thanks by the tips, you are one of a few people that really give me some constructive comments about the novel, that is my first job and I already wrote a little chapters ahead of that, just to translate, edit and post them here. I agree with you about the time skip thing, but I need him to be older because some secret reasons. So, thanks by the tips, I will have them in mind when I am writing the future chapters, I agree with you, no more long time skips, now that is time for Nicola run around the continent a little. That was in my plot when the story reach this point. Hope you enjoy the novel, and about the short chapters that everybody comments, maybe I should put that in the description, it's because I work and have no time to write all day, and I like the style of them, like, short chapters with big informations and let the imagination of the readers run free. ;)