whats a grudge? its a great story, but please find a proofreader or an editor before we start paying. it has plenty of errors.

these names... let me get back to June!

Michael is being too lenient with the Forest Elves. The armament deal is still one sided, he should do what he did with the Barthelomew Corp. deal and change the terms.A good Lord needs to be shrewd and milk every opportunity to the fullest!Great work so far

This is a great book, could not put it down since rhe day i picked it... Aero... is simply the best!

the wives are annoying like spoilt children... i want this i want that... dafuq!

Jake needs to learn open his treasures alone... he is too open for a hero...

thanks for the chapted... the presents are easily discarded ... why? the present from Queen Lion has to be of some importance, from the way she is described she does not seem to be like a person who would give a "simple" present... this feels like a plot hole of some sort!

stupid MC... he needs to get smarter... come on Author-san!

He left his lifeline (sistela) with his sister... da fuq? Huyu mshkaji ni mjinga kabisa... sawa nguvu hana, hata akili hana?

Udo will get someone killed or himself killed... i do not like such snitches! Msenge kabisa huyu jamaa!