You brought your story over form FF.net ? Awesome, are you gonna continue it here ?

The first half with the glactic policitics was interesting, bit the second half was just unnecessary preachy ranting about women and stuff , really killed the good start of the chapter

Would that meeting with Ace be an incentive for Farid to use some of his Points again, or would he not do that until forced in a fight or so

Don’t worry , im sure you will find a good way to portray their relationship in the future Futer, my 300 stones should prove my Faith lol

Good , at least sole People with sense. The MC still has the System, so after Growing to Gold Rogers Peak he will grow even more, so there is no need for Devil Fruit for him . Also even if Swords can eat Lightning Fruit it would not be sentient and couldn’t use any abilities, Zoans have to use there abilities themselves

Devon is actually very strong in the Future. But i agree, hope they die during this confrontation

Really didn’t expect Smoothie here. Also the Electro, does he slowly gain characteristics of the things that he wears ? Like strength of Fishman ? Or talent for Haki if he wears someone with enough for some time ?

I really hope he recruits Thatch. As a commander for Whitebeard he definitely has to be Strong. Also gets really done dirty in Canon for being a cool Guy( according to Ace)

No problem, i think Grimmjow looks awesome and fits Vestas imagine as King

Nice 👍🏻 I have liked the Skill from the first time i heard it, and it sounds like a Super cool way to turn a Stupid Fruit awesome

Karoman: One ability that could be insanely OP and on brand would be if the MC can wear surrounding Elementas, for example he can Wear Air like a Jacket to Gain Abilities like Aerolinesis and Flying Would be great for an Awakening skill or something

One ability that could be insanely OP and on brand would be if the MC can wear surrounding Elementas, for example he can Wear Air like a Jacket to gain ability’s around Air and flying, or Fire to have abilities like that. It would allow him to fight against anyone and be really cool as an Awakening skill

Loved the Original by the Real Author. Happy that he decided to join here and Stop the Plagiarism Kkkglglglglgmgmmgmgmmggmmgmgmmgmgmmgmgmgmgmgmgmgmmgmgmmgmgmgmmgmhng