also i am currently trying to fix my grammar mistake cause I am personally sad for the book so pray for me.

Hi, I am the author of the book. I will continue to write this book after I complete the fantasy book so if you are reading this book. I'm sorry and I do hope that you are willing to wait. Thanks p/s: I will change the unrealistic plot so don't worry.

Thank you for taking the time to read my book @Kaux_P 😭😭ಥ_ಥ ( •̀ ω •́ )✧

I'm not really good at writing a book review but I'd say this is a good book to recommend to my friends. I like the flow of the writing as well, I can't really spot anything big enough to point out in this review but somehow I think the author can do much more than this so I shall wait for the development of the story. I'm keeping this book in my library till the very end :)

The story is really interesting and the plot is good too. The main character does have flaws that would make us readers feel some sort of emotions through their action and I really like that. Although there are some parts that could be described more than just one word. It wasn't anything big that would stop me from reading. You have your own style of writing and I like that. Overall, I would read this book till the very end.

hi @king_and_dinah I would like to thank you for investing your time to check on my first book and i really appreciate the feedback coming from others. I too think I should work on my book covers sooner or later since I'm still contemplating whether the covers that i've choose is the right one. Again thank you for giving your feedback and I'd look forward to improve my writing so that it will be more fun to read. (p/s your review give me the motivation to do better)

ah, I understand where this is coming from. It wasn't from the title of the song though I admit it was a cool song. It is use as a reference regarding of the character's unhealthy obsession with strawberries and as for the cigarettes, you will have to find out by reading the book till the end. I hope this could answer you question. :)

Thank you so much for the review hunter101bomber. I'll make sure to keep a close eye on those grammatical errors and also with my capital letter. :))[img=recommend]