It's great. Delicious I must say. And I wanna more of it! I wanna see how the story line will continue! give me give me give me give me give me give me give me give MORE!
Man don’t stop, we need more chapters, more fight, more smut, MORE GRIND! Overall, the fic is greate, and really interesting, but sometimes feels like mc is too OP especially with fuin. Like to watch his bro attitude with Sasuke, and Hinata)
So what you plan to change? I see right now, he will be more emotional and will start talking. Moreover, he agree that love killing, which made he more to the villain side.
A black haired boy with sharp and slightly feminine appearance stands up. "I am Uchida Sasuke." He then sits back down without a care of the weird gaze some students are giving him.