justjohn

That declaration at the end, chills. My introverted self would've laughed in his face to cover up my second-degree embarrassment.

The fluff has affected the strength he needs to draw his sword. I wished he'd have more hunger for power. All these fluffy moments, in my opinion, are a waste of time. What the BOY needs is to acknowledge the Grind as his way of life, and start a massacre as a way to get over himself. Put that heroic shit to the side, it ain't needed on this lonely path.

the hood kinda doesn't fit well from my perspective. on ghost spider, yeah it looked dope... but for this suit? I'm having a hard time accepting it. the skin tight suit I think clashes with the hood. plus, where's the torso armour? chest armour? armour for the vitals?

the black's a bit too shiny for my taste. could it be matte? or that black that practically absorbs light? it looks metallic... sort of like a mix between a metal or spandex suit. still prefer the red and blue. maybe a dark navy blue? or midnight blue?

Was it not a writer's technique called "unreliable narrator"? From the POV of Felix, he believes this, so he thinks like this. Yet from the POV of his father, he believes in another aspect, which is different from Felix... Though I don't remember it being told from Felix's perspective...

Wants to be a hero hidden in the dark... streams himself wanting to be a hero in the dark.

honestly, kinda disappointed. I was feeling schadenfreude about the guy, happy he'd lived a fulfilling life, while cheering on these husbands and fathers'. Now, I'm just disappointed.

sigh... honestly, it's my fault. I couldn't be bothered remembering your name when I dropped your other pieces. If I had known... The drama's too much. The characters are garbage. The jokes... I don't even now if it was supposed to be funny... I only chuckled cause I thought the joke was dry and trash, the mc and love interests being trash for finding it funny.