Itokin237
of reading
2030
Read books
Badges
10Moments
36
Itokin2371mthCommentedCh 4 Becoming a Man- Itokin2372yrReplied to Rebel_Royal5
Vervain
John: Lets get started. - Itokin2372yrCommented
Vervain
John: Lets get started. - Itokin2372yrCommentedCh 3 3. To Ban Glean
- Itokin2372yrReplied to TrueFamineCh 2 2. Graduation
- Itokin2372yrCommented
« Murloc ancestor »
This paragraph has been deleted. - Itokin2372yrCommentedCh 1 Chapter 1: The Game of Supercivilization
- Itokin2372yrCommentedCh 1 Chapter 1: The Game of Supercivilization
- Itokin2372yrCommentedCh 13 Ch 12: Goals and a nightmare.
- Itokin2372yrCommentedCh 1 I Can't Harm My Descendants
- Itokin2372yrReplied to DrakeBerger
yep il est magnifique !!
we talk about what she did in Paris, she went to the louver. She told me she went into the catacombs and how creepy all the bones were. She tried escargot and almost puked, but the deserts there were amazing. She told me how her relatives wouldn't let her go out at night there. She asked why they said shell know when she older. :) - Itokin2372yrCommented
"Louvre" my friend
we talk about what she did in Paris, she went to the louver. She told me she went into the catacombs and how creepy all the bones were. She tried escargot and almost puked, but the deserts there were amazing. She told me how her relatives wouldn't let her go out at night there. She asked why they said shell know when she older. :) - Itokin2372yrCommented
nope he is still not coldblooded enough to dirty his own hands so he leave it to chance
"I will give you all a chance to live. If your luck is good, some kind hearted travelers will probably save you. But if not, then you all know what is coming. Either you all starve to death or die killed by wild beasts" - Itokin2372yrCommented
good!!!! i'm really happy with the direction you take with Michael, with him questionning Lucifer, about why he should take responsability for his actions and that Michael stop seeing Lucifer on a pedestal and as a victim
This chapter has been deleted. - Itokin2372yrCommented
whoah it's been a while good thing that you are rewriting i don't have a lot of ideas but you can make the mc start to make his mark in the wizard comunity and also building perharps an organisation or clan with a territory and all .... just some ideas good luck waiting for more chapter bye
Ch 42 Wizard councils visit. - Itokin2372yrCommented
dear godddd please no don't listen to the haters !!!! they're useless i love the time périod that you are currently doing keep up the good word it's a very good fan fiction
This chapter has been deleted. - Itokin2372yrCommentedCh 14 Awakening