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GreyMalken

GreyMalken

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2018-05-31 JoinedUnited States
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  • GreyMalken
    GreyMalken2yr
    Commented

    thats what not cultivating his core and treating his body like trash got him.....

    Ch 12 Devastating Soul awakening!
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    God´s Eyes
    Urban · HideousGrain
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  • GreyMalken
    GreyMalken2yr
    Replied to MadRat1286

    yeah, debit vs credit option with card I think.

    "Umm, cash... " Yuki bit her lower lip, thinking of how she was spending 2,000 on a new phone. But… She knew it would be helpful in emergencies. After paying the money, Yuki had to go through the process of setting the phone up so that only she could use it. If down the road she wanted to add someone, she could do so easily with a simple drop of blood from the person.
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    Soul Fusion Online
    Games · invayne
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  • GreyMalken
    GreyMalken2yr
    Posted

    It's slice of life, eastern style urban fantasy, wuxia lite in a modern setting. It's surprisingly good and wholesome to read. Highly recommend it.

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    System Only Gives Me Useless Gifts (Old)
    Urban · chocomug
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  • GreyMalken
    GreyMalken2yr
    Replied to Br0ken_Blade9

    *Magnum opus

    "I let someone else be the face of the company. Some poor shmuck gets all the credit for the price and confidentiality clauses involved. That is his entire life now. Managing his image, what a dumb fuck. We found the actor, and he gets paid about one hundred thousand a year to be hounded by reporters and intrusive looks into his life. Meanwhile, he has no power at the company. We all get to make decisions without anyone knowing. None of that Fuck Victoria for this glitch in my or this needs balancing I just get to live my life and work when I want to work now." I get it; although she might get tired of doing nothing, she just completed her Mangus opus, if you will.
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    Trap Online
    Sci-fi · Madjic
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  • GreyMalken
    GreyMalken3yr
    Replied to Cinque_39

    Didn't seem like a robbery, guy didn't ask for money, just charged up screaming and stabbing. Was he a jealous father/boyfriend of one of the cat-calling ladies? Was he after an underworld bounty? Was he triggered by Liam's aura, or the aura of the T3 metal? Dunno...but it would be nice to know a little more. The way Luan just shrugs and motors on sticks in my craw, it's very foolhardy of him and doesn't fit the profile of a reincarnated, wiser protagonist.

    Ch 19 Chapter 19: The Fool
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    Rise of the White Dragon
    Fantasy · Lruska
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  • GreyMalken
    GreyMalken3yr
    Commented

    why does he not investigate this attacker at all? even a few moments to interrogate, especially with mind/soul search, could be worth it. there are clearly faction(s) in the shadows after him and his stuff. he might want to focus on cultivating for now, but making a list of known active threats would be wise, especially since his friends and family are not as invincible as him. He might be bulletproof, but is his Mom?

    Ch 19 Chapter 19: The Fool
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    Rise of the White Dragon
    Fantasy · Lruska
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  • GreyMalken
    GreyMalken3yr
    Commented

    very shallow villain, not happy with it, could be better. like why did he not try to shmooze first? kidnap first, con-artist later is all out of order even for scum relatives.

    Ch 17 Chapter 17: Luan's Father was Behind All This?
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    Rise of the White Dragon
    Fantasy · Lruska
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  • GreyMalken
    GreyMalken3yr
    Replied to aoikuro

    I hope it doesn't, actually. Would be a good divergence from the original.

    Ch 1 The Loner Neglected By God
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    Five Frozen Centuries
    Games · Dr. Dreamer
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  • GreyMalken
    GreyMalken3yr
    Replied to Willowith

    Will continue to read to see if the story is inspired from, or plagerized. I liked EER's premise but didn't care for some of the later developments, so I am currently hopeful this story takes the same launch point in a better direction.

    Ch 1 The Loner Neglected By God
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    Five Frozen Centuries
    Games · Dr. Dreamer
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  • GreyMalken
    GreyMalken3yr
    Replied to General_Volkov

    Flower power?

    Thirdly, the forefathers of the human race had brought about cohesion and centripetal force.
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    My Senior Brother is Too Steady
    Eastern · Get to the Point
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  • GreyMalken
    GreyMalken3yr
    Commented

    It takes a village to raise a child... ba dum tsk!

    Ch 14 Aftermath
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    A Path of Bone and Poison
    Fantasy · Morbidwishes
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  • GreyMalken
    GreyMalken3yr
    Replied to Brain_Anderson

    Nah, there's no reason any "regrets" would not be washed away with the memory soup. I think the "regrets gate" is just a way for King Yama to get some free labour out of capable souls. She had a capable and successful life, and clearly the reward for good work is more work.

    Ch 1 The Gate of Regrets
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    Liam Drelavine : No Regrets!
    Fantasy · Avalondra
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  • GreyMalken
    GreyMalken3yr
    Posted

    So, the initial premise -- transmigrated uber-hacker bogged down by family inheritence politics getting revenge and looking after Mum.... that's a guilty pleasure story I could have found entertaining and enjoyed. It's pulpy and light, but that's it's own kind of flavor of story. Unfortunately, this promising story was invaded by ABUSIVE COLD CEO STALKER BOYFRIEND. You know, the creepy kind that pops up in various chinese so-called "romance" novels. It's not romantic, it's creepy, and the MC should get a restraining order. I really don't like how our capable uber-hacker leet MC loses all capabilities and swoons around getting manhandled and controlled. Or how the super-competent elite CEO loses all sensibility and morals when it comes to invading and controlling the life of a highschooler. It's creepy... please no... don't do this authors.

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    National School Prince Is A Girl
    Teen · Warring Young Seven
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