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Kana and Ceilie background and the reasons they hate humans was pretty good and it made sense why they bonded so quickly, but I can't say the same for this princess. I'm assuming the princess is a child, provably barely 13 since you failed to give her an age. But even if I consider her a small and naive child, the plot is too forced. If her maid was already brought by one of her siblings then she wouldn't allow the kid to run away, you already painted her as naive so she would be easily coaxed to give up these plans, even talking to one of the siblings or father. And they wouldn't allow her to escape and get so close to the border. It would've been better if you made the princess smart, cunning, hateful of royalty and humans after seeing her mother murdered and the indifference of a king, after seeing how greed and uncaring the servants are, after suffering abuse and humiliation once her mother was gone, but not this naive child who can be easily manipulated and has no sense of danger sleeping through the entire night attack and explosion. There's no reason to root for her or hope she becomes non-human, no reason to want her in the party.
Yeah... this one isn't working for me. The setting and idea behind are all nice but the execution feels lacking. To me it feels like the author pressed a "fast-forward" button and the story is going at 2x-4x the speed, it's so fast paced that there's barely any time to enjoy anything when it's just battle-battle-battle over and over again. Not only is every chapter a battle just to level the main character up, but they are also constantly filled with repeated information when he looks at his status all the time. I find myself skipping more and more paragraphs and making the already fast pace even faster, because each chapter doesn't really offer anything. And all that wouldn't be so bad if presented on an actual book, since I can buy the entire book and just read at my own pace. But for a web novel? If I had to read only a single chapter day by day as the story is being updated, this would never grab my interest, combined with the need for coins and fast passes to unlock each chapter, it's not worth it against the competition. I mean even the author other novels will be competing for attention against this one and they seem a lot better by comparison.
Yeah... this one isn't working for me. The setting and idea behind are all nice but the execution feels lacking. To me it feels like you pressed a "fast-forward" button and the story is going at 2x-4x the speed, it's so fast paced that there's barely any time to enjoy anything when it's just battle-battle-battle over and over again. Not only is every chapter a battle just to level him up, but they are also constantly filled with repeated information when he looks at his status all the time. I find myself skipping more and more paragraphs and making the already fast pace even faster, because each chapter doesn't really offer anything. And all that wouldn't be so bad if presented on an actual book, since I can buy the entire book and just read at my own pace. But for a web novel? If I had to read only a single chapter day by day as the story is being updated, this would never grab my interest, and now that I need coins and fast passes just to barely unlock a few chapters, it's not worth it against the competition. I mean even your other novels will be competing for attention against this one and they seem a lot better by comparison.
Isn't this bad? If he can push Ervas to 5-stars in the future he will be penalized for having leveled so much before, unless the system takes into account all of his previous levelups. Otherwise his summons will always be missing stats if he doesn't make them 5stars at lv1.