is very gooooood, go go go go go my friend !!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!

É que no futuro se ela fizer sucesso como fanfic, vc não pode fechar uma parceria com o webnovel, pra ter aquele capítulo que são fechados e precisa comprar pra abrir, ou pra fans poderem enviar presentes

Cara se é chato em porra é uma fanfic, o mundo não é preto no branco, vem com essa história tu é PT, mano do céu esquerda não se resumi a isso.

Vc é brasileiro tbm? Mesmo se não for a história é foda, só ano entendi ainda pq tá como fanfic

I really liked the chapter, I think it eliminated the draco x Lily feeling that I had in the chapter, that they know each other, but I think it would be cool even though it's not a severus x Lily couple, if you restarted their friendships, for what you wrote her to amazing , which was great since they usually make her hateful just because she doesn't love severus

man , I'm not in favor of a Lily x severus, but I think the only other option for Lily other than James , is severus, draco doesn't make sense.

please dude don't make Lily x Draco a couple, if you're going to change Lily's partner it has to be Snape. Your story is very good, keep it up

Let's go

thanks for Brazil

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i like Mary x severus x lily

Very good, I need more. ADD MORE Liiiiiiiiiiiiiikkkkkkkkkkkke Liiiiiiiiiiiiiiikkkkkkkkkkkkkeeeeee Liiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiikkkkkkkkkkeerrre Liiiiiiiiiiiiiikkkkkkkkkkkke Liiiiiiiiiiiiiiikkkkkkkkkkkkkeeeeee Liiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiikkkkkkkkkkeerrre

go go raven

very good, hope to see more, please don't give up

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They may have a weaker version of the system, not being as strong when the MC, as only being able to look at the stats but increasing the level does not give increased stats, and without the player's mind and body, being a system that helps them to get stronger, after all that would be the changing power of the MC so it has a more direct action on him, being more indirect on others. (sorry for any mistake I don't speak english very well)