Writing quality, considering that it's a Jord fic then it's for sure not trash, not exactly a masterpiece or anything but it's definitely way above average. Which is way too fucking rare on this site. For the stability of updates, well, again, considering that it's a Jord fic then I can only assume the muse is gonna drop at some point, so I'm just enjoying the mass release of chapters while it's going on. For the story development, it's actually p good with interesting twists so far. But I won't spoil. ;) For the character design, as always it's a Jord-like MC, meaning a ton of grind as well as running his mouth with no filters, which I personally enjoy because fucking hell one starts to get tired with all the white knights or fucking edgy psychopaths, plus there is an interesting take due to the twin Twice Criticals, it basically functions as an enhanced but still bootleg Boosted Gear, but I'm assuming it'll grow into something else considering there are many possibilities to the Balance Breaker, such as the Sub-Species and the X Side which brings new abilities to the table. For the world background, there is an alright use of Slash/Dog so far which usually revolves around Lavinia in other fics (and it's fine cause she's great), as well as the other crossovers so far such as Uzaki and Ikki Tousen. Overall I'm enjoying it, and it's what fucking counts because fuck y'all.

Except that the author already said that 1 chapter every day was incredibly tiring and mentally exhausting to write every day :)))))) so why not stop asking stuff like that and actually think about the author's well-being for a second instead of thinking only about yourself? :)))))) Plus in the first place it was only 1 chapter every Sunday, now it's 1 half Friday and the other half Sunday so it's better for you degenerates who want a hundred chapters every day :))))))

Considering the "contract" in 2 months it may indeed mean that, however we don't know what's going to happen during those 2 months now do we? AFO might just decide to steal Horizon's Quirk only to fail and end up making a contract, or even something else.

What you forgot, and was the main subject of Horizon's point, was that his Quirk is built for his body and that you need complete control over your own body's functions which is great information for All For One. Because on the U.A Festival he only saw someone copy Horizon's Quirk and almost die from doing that, however with that information he can adapt to it and take Quirks that helps in endurance and body functions should he decide to steal Horizon's Quirk.

Hello, thank you for the nice chapter as always :) Quick question, are you gonna use Law's Devil Fruit's Awakening for Horizon's Quirk's Awakening ? Thank you for your response and I look forward the future chapters :)

And he already trained day and night since young and even more since he got his Quirk, while Izuku didn't even think about analyzing his own Quirk after the Entrance Exam for an entire month (Entrance Exam was February 26 and School Opening was early April) or anything else to not injure himself, Horizon has potential and continues to train hard to get stronger every single day while Izuku simply does physical training and didn't even think about Martial Arts, Parkour, Yoga or stuff like that to help with his movements

I can't say for sure, but I would say that Sakura has more chances than Ino

Hinata and Tenten are actually correct since they are locked in (from a Patreon poll), Tsunade is off the table since the waifus can only be below 20 years old, I would say Temari has a pretty high chance as well as Fû, however for the 5th spot (cause yes the limit is 5 waifus) I don't know exactly

Both yes and no, the Chûnin Exams in fanfiction is usually extremely long and boring by itself, which is why it's known as the Naruto Fic Killer, and also Jord, the author, is using the time until the prelims to do socials (interacting with people), because after the prelims are done it's going full training montage until the finals.

Mate the Uchiha Clan is literally about making Fireballs as a child, you think as 4 years old they already mastered the training for Fire Release ? The training just helps for your future jutsus and the more difficult jutsus, its just like Chakra Control, it helps but it isnt completely necessary

Author said every fillers exists within the fanfic so whether it's anime only moments or movies it doesn't matter

"In the anime, Isobu's abilities were greatly elaborated upon. It could create shockwaves to repel attacks and produce large tidal waves around it, enabling it to overwhelm Guren's Crystal Release several times over the course of their battle. When Isobu ate something, thousands of miniature versions of itself would attack what was eaten within its stomach, presumably to speed up the digestion process. It was also shown capable of Space-Time Ninjutsu, materialising an entrance to a separate dimension in which it could hide its presence, until it was ready to return to wherever it chooses."

Interesting Self-Insert of sorts, the MC has metaknowledge and isn't afraid of using it and messing with canon, even helping a certain someone change her personnality, a x1000 times better than Beta MCs being afraid of changing stuff.

I mean it is canon that by eating a dragon you become a Dragon Slayer of their element, so is that method really far-fetched ?

"The Yuna" is the answer to everything.

I myself prefer Yoruichi > Harribel > Senjumaru > Rukia > Suì-Fēng

I didn't find the story on fiction live and fanfiction net, is it only here on webnovel ?

You don't have to worry about the age gap, I didn't read the author's stories on fanfiction net beside this one however I've read every stories he has on fiction live and I assure you that the age gap isn't gonna stop the MC from banging girls into a coma lol

Sorry 'bout that mate, just wanted to give you a heads up ^^ I really enjoy the author's stories as well, so honestly I'm just as sad as you

Enjoy it while you can tho, there are only 13 full chapters of this story on fanfiction net (longer chapters than the ones here on webnovel) and the start of the 14th on fiction live, chapter 34 on webnovel will be the end of chapter 12, so on webnovel I believe we only have around 7 chapters left