ohh um brasileiro por aq, q raridade

I literally don't comment, much less post reviews, but this novel really pissed me off at how racist it is. I felt compelled to lower the rating of this waste of existence a bit. - google translate

é isso q é a merda dos bagui chines

estou amando a histora ^^

yes

Pegue algum de cultivo, para ele ter uma há habilidade pro mana

Eh me desculpa não comentar, isso livro é de mais de bão, eu fiquei total imerso nele kkkkkkkkkkkk Parabéns cara q livro bão de maisssss ❤️

Por isso q gosto de br, n tem medo de viajar para o mundo da lua Kkkkkk

javali, porco do mato, cateto ( aqui tem diferença entre eles mas a de javali é a melhor kkkk)

Obrigado autor, e tudo de bom pra vc, boa viagem

yes, finali not harem, (and pls dot romance :D)

oh, uma light novel br, entao se é br, n li e mesmo assim vo dar 5 estrelas entao até :D 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Regarding what I said about the speed of the story, I kept thinking, you can easily create several situations so that the story becomes big, since it is not just a world, so right

(translated by google translator) well put the sentences together, do not type 5 words in a line and after a paragraph plus 5 words, because it is bad to read, but also do not make very large paragraphs (10 lines only in 1 paragraph), make this separation after a period that would be better and the phrases would be more consistent, and about the story, I don’t give opinions because what’s the fun of reading it, since you had the idea: D. I don’t have a romance in history, I read anything, but I know that web novel readers only think of harem and romance, I can't particularly read romance much less harem, but if your intuitor is going to make a story based on what the readers comment, I wish you all the luck, tip (be careful not to progress the story too fast if not in a very few chapters it's over the story of one punch man kkkk)