“That’s a date I’ll gladly take.” - Your local no.1 Ifnir simp

Sorry, when this review is written

Bless Itoade for giving me another book to obsess over! Only been 4 chapters when this story is written, but it's going amazing so far! Anyways. Faye is a smol powerful bean that needs to be protected, Aqua is a queen, Jacques is so done with Faye's shenanigans and I want Ifnir's hand in marriage. Writing's great, amazing world, looking forward to more chapters.

Descriptions are amazing! Even though I'm not a military fan, there's a very clear image within my mind. However, do note that most webnovel readers enjoy short and snappy paragraphs to quickly read though. Looking forward to more from this author!

Despite the paragraphs being a tad too long in webnovel standards, it's clear that the writer wanted to tell a special story in their own way, and that is something I will always appreciate. The different POV changes between chapters are a bit too jarring and quick for me, but it allows the author to create a vibrant world and tell the same story from different angles and factions, allowing for an interesting storytelling experience. The pace is a bit too quick for me, so if you're a fan of quick paced stories, pick it up. It's a unique experience amongst the many I have seen on Webnovel and it is well executed. Overall, a great read! Keep on writing! - TiramisuandCoffee

Is he mentally saying system to himself or whispering it under his breath?