Ederel
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Ederel1dReplied to Ederel"As Mona said, there is a man named Igor in the Velvet Room. He grants the power of the wild card, which allows me to hold more than one persona. With the Velvet Room's aid, I can fuse and strengthen my personas, with the help of his assistants—"- Ederel1dCommented
igor doesn't grant the wild card. he only guides. it is the master of the velvet room that give it
"As Mona said, there is a man named Igor in the Velvet Room. He grants the power of the wild card, which allows me to hold more than one persona. With the Velvet Room's aid, I can fuse and strengthen my personas, with the help of his assistants—" - Ederel1mthCommented
three*
All there of them came to the Dining room to find all the food placed on the table - Ederel1mthCommented
secretary* author needs an editor
"Hmm, that's a relief, but I want to meet him first, I just want to check whether what you are saying is true or just exaggerating his strength, you can fix a meeting time with my secretory" - Ederel1mthCommented
everything*
"Of course, I remember that dumb girl, she left every this for that Senju, why do you think I will ever forget her" Fugaku said - Ederel1mthCommented
not to use*
'why is this not evolving I am pretty sure that it is on the verge of evolving, initially I didn't have any plans to have Sharingan, but now that I have this I would be a fool to use it in the best way - Ederel1mthCommented
capable*
But they are wrong the clone jutsu is very basic and can easily be rendered useless if your enemy knows basic sensing techniques or is cable enough to notice small details ( which most of the experienced ninjas can) - Ederel1mthCommented
career*
After the report Hokage may make the mission classified so if share the details of such a mission then there is a very high chance that you may be labeled as a traitor, and even if the higher up accept that it was a mistake then also your carrier will be hard to progress after this and you may remain a chunin for rest of your life - Ederel1mthCommented
if a monkey used chakra it would be a dead giveaway of using transformation jutsu.
The book said that controlling chakra while transformed into an animal is very difficult since we just imitate their physical nature, not chakra veins, but since he imagined his whole body transforming from cell to cell he was also able to modify the chakra veins to suit this new body, though subconsciously - Ederel1mthCommentedAfter all, the bathroom in Gabriel's house was too small, and there was no way to accommodate two people bathing at once.
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3 interludes
[Interlude]The migrant wave - Ederel3mthCommented
When main story progression? or MC pov?
If you want there to be a chapter tomorrow, the condition is simple, twenty comments on what you would like to see or what you liked or disliked about the story (each person has one valid comment, multiple comments will only be counted as one).or reach the 300 power stones - Ederel3mthCommented
gundam wings inspired?
His name is Treize Khushrenada. - Ederel3mthCommentedCh 124 Afterword
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where is the last two members of A team
He ran his gaze over the table they were sitting at, noting Romani, Hinako (Yu), Kirschtaria who wasn't nearly as much of an upstuck asshole as Nicholas had thought, his assistant, the eye-patch wearing brunette nord Ophelia Phamrsolone, Kadoc of course, and the two empty seats. - Ederel3mthReplied to Penniless
I agree on this. Main stories should be the bulk there could be one or two interlude for every ten main chapters and interlude should be after main arcs not like this three interludes back to back!
your decision - Ederel3mthCommentedCh 67 The Argo of Westeros