the most useless thing ever didnt even bother to use it once.

do u even proofread bro? too many mistakes. check first before uploading. you only need a minute to read a chapter so check first before uploading please.

one chaptee for entering the cave and opening it what a work of art lol

the original is much better than this. Like really another mystery i though u will improve story but its not its lame.

typical mistake with this traslation people. why bother translate it properly to english when u make the biggest mistake of all the names and etc. like did u even read the OG work cause if u read the OG u will directly know the names like cmon man do some research first before translating. i appreciate ur work for translating it to english but do some justise on it

fuck this guy. can't believe will upload shit without proofreading. such a fucking rookie mistake. cmon every chapter there's always a mistake and the problem is it's not the grammar it's the names wtf so fucking dumb. Ur translating but u can translate the grammar properly but the names cmon bruh.

Is so dumb wheres the consistency????

Man a fanfic trying so hard lol really a chapter for this?? Like really? Wasted stuff its fanfiction u dont need to waste to explain everything. We already know it in the iriginal. Lol

Is it me or what that like im reading the original style of writing too slow too many explantions like this is a fanfic u dobt need to give ur all by explaning every detail what ur doing like im bored im not here to read a original work thou. Its weird for me lol.

Harem alert slow pace type atoryline cmon ita already copy pasted atory of luffy u dont need to milk it so much like its like 1 manga 1 chapter its so boring already we understand the training arc but cmon even in this part u gonna prolong it.

Is their a position captain or deputy captain in naruto or term? Is this one piece or bleach? Cause all i know is the genin chunin etc etc, correct me if im wrong somebody? Im just confused lol

200 expi 20 saiyan blood so 2% so why its only 17%? Hmmm

Unjust? Wtf guilty much? I am even asking of this is the original or not like wtf! Ur so defensive bro so basically this is is a copy pasta based on ur comment cause i didnt to read it cause im waiting for reply. Snowflake deleting reviews. Only leaving the bots 5 star review lol. If u are this snowflake stop writing bro cause ur fragile self esteem will be demolished by people here and i didnt say anthing about about this one and ur so hurt already wtf.

I think i saw this work before sinbad one piece. And it was dropped. Is it a rework? Are u the original author? Or ur copy pasting his work? Cause even the thumbnail is the same im not sure if this one is the original or the rework cause that fanfic was dropped for so long already.

So basically its a new person with the memory of hisao and indra? Right? Not hisao himself who reincarnated?

He's autistic right? Can barely speak at 3? LoL.

Man too much talk no jutsu. Like cmon its so xianxia type already always late then talk no jutsu then not using all the powers when fighting like i hate chinese writers man like even a fanfic can they make it normal lol. I know u just translated this one but cant help to react to the ff lol.

Nope another carbon copy with that stupid madara author. Another hidden villian identity that broke the story so bad. U really like him so much huh that u even copy everything he wrote even the bad things. Hahaha maybe this is a parody lol. What a comedy show.

Man i lost interest i thought it will have a high quality stuff exploitation but where given with childish pranks and thoughts like the story start with a bang but when the madara moment came the humour become so unbearable like im thinking is this a work of a 5 yr old. Maybe it just me it things they are doing is so basic plus they have aizen loki its just the humour is so childish. Maybe my expectation is so high on this one that it did not deliver want i want lol. Sorry author its just my honest opinion.

Boring u dont need to prolong this arc. U already know whats gonna happen in the story but milking it by not finishing the fights and hiding its strengths whats the point in making him OP were just basically reading the fillers from the original story. "if u dont like OP mc this is not for u" in the descrip but on the other hand kage powers cant finish fight easily for cliche equals boring no excitement better put a OP mc than 1 jutsu per chapter just to prolong the fight like cmon ur just copying narutos plot u dont need to try hard so much by milking arcs like this.