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mrk_haven1171yrCommentedCh 1 Reborn 1 [Rewrite]- mrk_haven1171yrCommented
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This book has been deleted. - mrk_haven1171yrCommentedCh 2 chapter Two : Dislocating Arrival
- mrk_haven1171yrCommentedCh 2 Chapter 2: Forest and people
- mrk_haven1171yrCommented"Mutants eh? Fucking terrorists. Always blowing shit up. Well not my probl…? "
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Im probably wrong but if the darkness part of the quirk has a physical attribute to it(meaning it can touch people) and the metal wings will eventually get the senbonzakura traits like in bleach, can't he manipulate his wings to fly faster using the darkness to kind of boost everywhere he goes? again I may be wrong so you don't need to take this comment seriously.😗👍
After that we started to do the test, the first one was 50m dash. I was paired up with Momo for all the tests, so when our turn came we got ready, Momo created skating shoes and a jetpack? I don't know but something that will help her propel her forward. As soon as the machine buzzed we both ran at the same time. I reached first with four seconds as my timing, Momo got right behind me with one second difference. - mrk_haven1171yrCommented
Ok first thanks for the chp,it was a great start!👍 but I have a question on the fact that I know nothing about DnD. so what I'm asking is what is the "limit" on what DnD powers affect? is it neighborhood, town, city, country, continent, planetary, or universal. this could be on destruction, creation, or versitality. just asking to get a general gist on the story.😗
Ch 1 Prologue (REWRITE) - mrk_haven1171yrReplied to Killler_Queen
probably his inner thoughts on the current situation.
{Why are we hesitating? Our family and friends are dead, there is nothing left of us here.} - mrk_haven1172yrCommentedCh 2 Arrival To The New World
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IM SO MOTIVATED!!! JUDGMENT CU- uhh stab?
This time my blade wasn't stopped by his ultra-durable muscles, as even Thor's defenses couldn't stop a blade, that was able to rip apart space itself. - mrk_haven1172yrCommented
great chapter!! 😁👍 hope you keep going 😁
This book has been deleted. - mrk_haven1172yrReplied to Saltycarmel69
hmmm, I'd think if you want conflict at the start with in reason then be reborn. but if you want to just go full throttle and bash some young masters head's in go transport in the woods. these are just a few suggestions I could think of on the spot, but it's your call what you want to do 😗👍
Ch 1 The Beginning - mrk_haven1172yrCommentedCh 1 The Beginning
- mrk_haven1172yrCommentedCh 42 Everything in its place
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if you want suggestions, what about ultron armor from the what if series? it looks pretty cool and not skin tight like the original armor from dxd.😗
Even though the armour was very good in both design and look however he felt that something was not good with it. He felt that he needs to have another type of armour design in his mind which is not like this. Maybe he was trying to look for an armour that does not hug his body like this one? He was not sure however he didn't continue to waste his time thinking about that. - mrk_haven1172yrCommented
it be pretty cool if the nanites could do this from metal gear!!
{At my current processing power, while keeping the task of keeping your body surrounded in a thin field of nanites to prevent small cuts, abrasions, or in this case bites. It will take me approximately a week, I would need to be further upgraded to reduce the time needed.} - mrk_haven1172yrCommented
In comparision to another hero or villian how strong is he now?
After Leon broke the bullet leon almost seemed like using teleport. Before the person could notify the people In the second floor Leon already punched him into a wall knocking him out. - mrk_haven1172yrCommentedCh 38 Return to Earth; Research
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welcome back[img=recommend]
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