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Suddenly I can feel the xanxia slowly creeping in. "I your father have a million shurikens". "Don't touch my bottom line". "this sword will cleave the heavens". "The third prince is smart, powerful and have a cheat like power." Not dissing the author by the way I enjoy the story. But I find the Chinese novels effect slowly creeping in wish makes me feel that those characters are out of place. Still keep up the good work.
Perfectly balanced.
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Azazel: Does your race have any fatal weakness? MC: Of course for you see.....( Explanation) and here is the weapon you can use to destroy me and my whole race. I can lend it for free. Do you have a map? Let me mark the location of our hidden country so prepare your forces to subjugate us.
I can feel the edge.
The man the myth the legend
You can just make it so that gods don't exist or just make dxd weaker
Future kidnapper. Just stack a shit ton of poison and paralysing skills and learn some stealth then boom instant kidnapper.