Problem: The Sun. Solution: One billion lions.

He came from cliffhanger village.

As someone who has led plenty of guilds before I can completely agree that this is a problem that you will run into if the game has enough PvP and PvE events. Which players only care about one or the other? Which players want excellence in both? What is going to be the guild direction moving forwards now that it is hitting the member cap and more want to join because you're starting to get solid leader board rewards? Do you kick the old members who helped build the guild now that you need to focus on something specific as they want to focus on something else and no longer fit the direction the guild is going? Small guilds don't have this problem, and games with a guild player limit higher than even participation limit don't have these problems as well as guilds where people are only there for the sake of community. This is why most games now just have a general power ranking where there are just stats that work in both PvE and PvP.

1351 days without rest? that's a lot of not sleeping.

The females I'm around like hanging out with gay men more than other girls.

Of course he can't stand, he's currently busy kneeling.

Fear that your very existence could be erased? That tends to accelerate the heartbeat.

First chapter: Walkthroughs are useless. Second chapter: MC creates a walkthrough.

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If you mention this you're screwed. If she's actually on the period you're triple screwed.

As a gamer I've given and taken more salt than I've eaten rice. And I eat rice every day.

Every now and then the game popups appear so we don't forget.

The protagonist.

I'm actually praising the pacing. It was really good in the start of the story. The average book contains around 30-40 chapters, so good pacing is solving a major plot problem every 30-60 chapters. I was just saying that as you slowed the rest of the book down and focused on the characters, your writing improved, while the pacing dropped off. Personally I'm excited to see how you rewrite everything now that you've improved.

While the first 200 or so chapters had mediocre writing, they had fantastic pacing. Something was always happening, and the action you're talking about was always there. the next two thirds of the story pretty much turned into a slice of life with the harem. This caused your writing of exposition and dialogue to become much better, and is probably why you cringe at that in the beginning of your novel. A way to describe it is your story is like a hallway with rooms. The end of the story is the end of the hallway. Before you were writing the story and it was like walking down the hallway and just glancing through a window on the door into the rooms. Things were moving fast but we didn't know much about anything on the side. But now we are walking into every room and making sure to check under the bed, admire the curtain colors, and dust the shelves. While we know a lot about everything on the side, those things don't directly lead to the development of the plot. I would personally like to see you stick more closely to the original pacing, as that is how I prefer stories, but this is your book. You write it how you want to write it, because in the end it is your story to tell, not mine. Keep up the good work, and I'm happy to see you want to keep improving.