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I disliked how in original, Leylin just gives away Grine Water without researching it's medicinal properties just to save Bicky! It was so painful to see him share his resources, I hope that doesn't happen here. Although the general arcs are the same..for example I think twilight zone would be next...But I think changing some outcomes and making different choices to make OC more powerful then MC would be a good idea. Just my mumblings as I disliked the original MC for calling himself evil and then being a hypocrite by showing compassion. Nice chapter!