lazygeko

Edit: "I knew that I will find you..."

"sheep" not ship Suffolk sheep classically have black skin with white wool.

So Leonel is basically the plot device used to turn all MC's plans into conflict, to add drama and suspense?

Since he is going the distance to help her, he should include her into most/all of his plans. The merc duo could rampage across the server. FOR THE MONEY!!!!!

If she became who she was because of the hardship she went through along the way, then if he helps her at every turn, won't she turn into something different? As always, it is up to the authors whim.

Incorrect 'their'. Should be 'There are many who will.'

Change blunt to brunt.

The idiom is egg someone on, edging someone has an entirely different meaning.

Three things? Her 3 sizes?

If only the world worked like that... /sigh