love your novel, everyday I wait for that notification of your story being updated and am enjoying it so far. keep it up :)

thanks for the update, keep up the good work

keep up the good work

mistake made i believe, they should be stage 3 now right?

gj on progress of story. always as entertaining :)

cringe

my bad my bad haha xD

as you're not regularly updating the story and I've been favouring this story for quite some time now I was wondering if dave had attained this "sword heart physique" or not? I felt it having been brushed over and so am asking... :p

always a pleasure to read your story :)

keep up the good work, always a pleasure to read a good book.

not too keen on trans stuff but if they are a non-gendered human gaining a gender by activating their physique... then i guess it's fine...

looking forward to the continuation, idk if you'll continue until the end but know that with the way the story is going, im hooked :)

good story, worth the read, there's no ntr as all that's happened is the gf cheating and fooling him and him realising he was played and lost a lot of money... the second harem member is someone he ensured would stay dependent and devoted to himself so the endgoal was reached, be she a virgin or not.

great fan of your work, gj in coming this far and I look forward to future chapters! :)

gonna be completely honest here... when I saw universe will, I thought zatiel did the sacrifice line the previous guy against eternal darkness... reading it now... I loved it all, good work and keep it up.

hmm, the ten silver stars of origin, how does she possess those or rather, how are they able to empore ezeqiel to such a level? am hoping to get that content covered to ensure proper plot, if at all possible.

tbf, it's just 6 and a half inches... pretty normal of a size...

get a surgery, or go trans then.

Loving your story so far, keep up the good work, not many that are so persistently detailed as you so it makes me glad you actually follow through, idk what's going to happen moving forward but i stand by the fact that i love the story (though you're not that good in detailing the women unfortunately :P )

school or not, you're good at making stories m8, love your book so far, keep up the good work!