You say you look at feedback and like the comments but you continue to write in this pretentious way. It is getting really annoying and hard to read when you add unnecessary words and description. No human talks like this in real life. Please just try to simplify your writing a bit!!!!

It’s like you are trying extra hard to make the book sound sophisticated but you are going way over the limits. At this point you are unnecessarily using fancy words and descriptions

I like the story and I am fine with you using very complex vocabulary. However, you are sometimes overdoing and adding complex words where there is no need and it is slightly annoying.