these types of mistakes put me off. Most of the time I keep thinking about uninstalling the app.

well it's first line is so boring that I'm droppin' it.

Why do you have to set limit. couldn't you simply say," If this constitution is cultivated properly, then there's no limit to growth".

People have written reviews covering everything they could, I'm just writing it for the sake of rating. And if these types of stories get awards then you can imagine the quality level(in every sense from imagination to translation) of webnovel itself. I think since 2018 or 2019 webnovel has went down the drain of gutter never to turn towards clear waters.

After seeing the description full of meaningless explanation and bad like fkiñ bad English I'm not gonna read it and also seeing the meaningless time wasting description gives me the whole idea of writing/imagination level of author of this book so I'm out.

ewww. The description of this novel especially the use of word meat rod gave me chills. And everyone knows it's creepy and only immature inexperienced people use it those who feel shame bcz they have no experience in sex field. can't even say penis clearly. So I'm not gonna read it.

bro there are plenty of good stories without harem but less good stories with harem. If you are looking for good stories without harem then you'll find plenty of them. otherwise you won't find any.

Also how can eliza be op when there's another soul which brought mc back in time.

why in the fk you Mr. Crappy Author are all over the place. There's no proper direction of your story progression. And don't you fkiñ dare make sexual intercourses longer than necessary. Keep 'em short like your dick. Also don't develop romance shits in it. just keep them as sex friends and nothing more. On that note don't make eliza MC's friend or sex friend. keeping her as enemy is good. If you dare turn every fkiñ girl into MC's girl, I'll leave bad reviews to your story on every platform dragging your name through the muddiest of waters. So after reading my comment, you may have gotten the clear picture of being all over the place. My comment is similar to your story. So I'm hoping for you to improve it with proper syntaxes and words.

and third possibility" you were just npc who somehow during testing phase infiltrated a user".

lol bro you and your excessive use of "and".

lol you and your fkīn excessive use of "and".

shouldn't it be a common occurrence for demons to try to infiltrate and vice versa.

lol, how is servant quarter deep. it's not like you built it in the core part of sect.

Don't tell me she's gonna be the fkīn waifu now.

"situation" would be a better word.

Are we still calling it"English"?.

it's she or he or altogether tranny

logic is dead.

strength doesn't matter, imagine if someone sees scarecrow waving at ya. how spoo'tacle would that be.