move on my friend your doing great and we love the story so have more confidence in yourself

congrats bro

both if you can truly make it work

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

dude being high on weed and reading the exchange between the MC and god was hilarious keep up the great work we as readers appreciate the amount of time and effect you worked on this

love the story and concept I can tell you put a lot of thought in the story please keep writing

love the chapter please keep them coming

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