As a positive, I van say that this was a bit generic and bland on sole places, but interesting on mechanics side. However, I couldn't keep reading due to the charachters low intelligence, predictable and stupid behavioral pattern and the ability to forget heir main charachteristics, or any promises made in the story.

That is sad to hear, your style was fresh and made me smile in many occasion. I wish you luck in your future endeavors (whatever they may be)

The school needs better appraisers.

You do know that a discount toileg paper doesn't exist during pandemic? So essentially Jack felt empty, lost and had an existential crisis.

the body is a made up-lie. So jack is, in some twisted way, telling thr truth.

read the text as: leech. dyslexic translation: witch? double take: leech. after the chapter: the witch part was weird... I shouldn't read anything at 3am.

"Hey what an interesting specimen. Extremely young body with a mind of calamity. Carries the Gods inside albeit rejecting everyone... I bet it would be a great test subject..." -story of an overly zealous rock.

would have been easier to give print-outs of the rules on the door, but I guess some people just want to hear their own voices.

Hey, baby, that rock is crying. It propbly wants a hug.

It is terribly uppsetting, when you get notified about a chapter and there is nothing to read. Not the fault of the author, but WNs coding. Still uppsetting. (Keep up the great work and flesh out the story on your own leissure author.)

when you make the right decision for the wrong reason.

I wish I had came up with this good of a comnent

I am glad that he was not instantly deaclared officiakky dead, like in some other books.

It was metal that separated the hedmaster from vikings and not robes, you win this round Creator.

So you xan break most barriers by searching for correct frequency and blasting some resonance. Hope more advanced barriers have scramblers installed.

Clearing cache also removes downloaded stories... I lost my cottage readings and had to download them again -_- (*minor inconvenience at worst, keep feeding me more chapters)

so the principal had a metallick armor or long robes, I'd guess the later.

I know the meaning and completely understood the sentence, but I wanted to peek at the mind of the creator

And I doubt the idiog evfn had any sweets to try and bribe the foxes.

I could see this coming a mile away (some chapters), but I am still speechless.