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nariko_ren

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  • nariko_ren
    nariko_ren1yr
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    heh

    Ben opens his clenched right hand and pours more MP onto it before clenching it again. He spread the gravity all over the gigantic ball and then compress it. The gigantic ball's size reduces slowly as it gets denser and denser.
    Fairy Tail: Sun Eater
    Anime & Comics · Capt_mermain1
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  • nariko_ren
    nariko_ren2yr
    Replied to ChloeThorne

    sorry I took so long to see your reply, looking over the chapter again, either you've already edited it, or I'm in a clearer state of mind since it reads clearly to me now. I recall posting that comment because there were a few moments where the speaker seemed to change either without mention or without a clear transition of character tone/style. Apologies for being so vague

    Ch 11 Chapter Eleven: Your Majesty
    My Rebirth into a NobleWoman Despite My Good Life.
    Fantasy · ChloeThorne
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  • nariko_ren
    nariko_ren2yr
    Commented

    some parts of the exchange near the end of this chapter are a bit rough in terms of who says what, but otherwise, I like where this is heading [img=recommend]

    Ch 11 Chapter Eleven: Your Majesty
    My Rebirth into a NobleWoman Despite My Good Life.
    Fantasy · ChloeThorne
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