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It was good before the reveal of the devil fruit of mc its just the ability of the fruit is complicated and its going in the same pattern as the other one piece fanfiction i read, because the ability of the fruit is complicated it will fall in the same category of the other story of excuse of rewrite or drop or loss interest or no idea to navigate the story sooner or later it will definitely happen im sure of of it so sorry
I agree it's like your asking the fanfiction god a really big writer block curse you'll just self destruct at this point sooner or later and another story falls in the same excuse of rewrite or drop or loss interest or no idea where to navigate the story. because you made the ability of the fruit complicated i suggest rewrite chapter make the fruit simple with big possibilities.
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