your first version is fine, the second I feel too cliche

How about an author, regarding your story I have also read the novel, it is on pause but it was not canceled, the author explained that he has many ideas and is looking for a good ending anyway I hope your novel is just as serious and you do not give him power just like that, Laplace allows the assertion ms does not give it away

Hello, author, I have a question what you will do with the protagonist and with his destined rival, and how are you going to address the ridiculous levels of power that is it, and it continues like this.

justicia poetica

I am impressed, these animes simply make my head ache, for absurd powers I am a fervent faithful of human science and technology is able to make human beings shine thanks for this novel.

Are you sick Stark

Also if you have problems with the power levels between the Gods and the Espers, maybe this will help you: Legendary Esper: 1) Initial Stage: 50% control of the law or skill you master. Life expectancy: 500 years. 2) Intermediate Stage: 70% of the grade or ability Hope: 50,000 years. 3) Late Stage: 90% Life expectancy: 5,000,000 years 4) Peak Stage: 100% Life expectancy: 500,000,000 years. I think it also works for the Irregulars of the magical world but it must be taken into account that each stage is an almost impenetrable wall, a staircase against the sky, so that an SSS hope can cross or Demigods of the Apotheosis stage must have a battle strength of half step legendary level, and cross a heavenly tribulation. Gods: they must cross a divine calamity to ignite their divine spark and be able to ascend: Initial Stage: 5000 followers to obtain the faith. Intermediate Stage: 500,000 followers Late stage: 50,000,000 followers. Peak Stage: 5,000,000,000 followers.

If you have a lack of inspiration, maybe my humble imagination will serve you, that in the future I will not be a spaceship with the last survivors together with a female existence of legend level, perhaps after they park on the magical planet with the help from Bloed, start to find some form of energy like Prana, maybe you could find spiritual techniques similar to the Haki of One piece, I say this by the fact that the Aura of the king resembles the Haki of the Conqueror, and that I use these techniques as a bargaining chip for more technology.

Author, I hope you do not abandon it, your novel is excellent if you have personal or creativity problems, I recommend that you rest, one way to feel more inspiration is to read your works as if you were another reader, well that was told to me by a teacher at the University , such a story would be a real loss.

Dear author, I thank you for this work and to seem sincere, the novel is one of the few that I really like, I read it about 6 years ago, and believe me to see a story with the same protagonist, and with the love and effort that you put into it. It is appreciated, I look forward to the story, one thing I take it as a help that you put some kind of technology from another universe, I do not give it another perspective

If we think about it carefully, the only being that will allow his reincarnation is the first Linley.