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  • killuaxx15
    killuaxx151yr
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    Does this blood ritual only work to Ves' personally fabricated mechs and not those mass produced living mechs? And did he try Blinky to resonate with Casella like when he did the Everchanger with Joshua?

    Ch 3723 Reversing Years
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    The Mech Touch
    Sci-fi · Exlor
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  • killuaxx15
    killuaxx152yr
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    So in this design round, Ves only has 1 solo project and a few very minimal contribution to other design projects? Is his contribution to every project even enough to earn hin design points from the system?

    Ch 3623 Thorn Project
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    The Mech Touch
    Sci-fi · Exlor
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  • killuaxx15
    killuaxx152yr
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    So Vincent's mech doesn't have a design spirit?

    Ch 3613 The Stakes
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    The Mech Touch
    Sci-fi · Exlor
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  • killuaxx15
    killuaxx152yr
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    Shouldn't Ves start working in a lot of solo design projects so that he could earn a lot of design points and redeem the senior or expert mech package? Being an assistant or contributing designer gives very few points.

    Ch 3538 Fearless Project
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    The Mech Touch
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  • killuaxx15
    killuaxx152yr
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    Why is Roland introduced as the rightful king of Albania? Is Albania used to be a part of Fermion?

    Ch 188 King Roland Godwin the III
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    Rise of a Finance Minister
    Fantasy · Silver_1_Phoenix
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  • killuaxx15
    killuaxx152yr
    Commented

    I think all of them wanted are custom "living mechs" and not just custom mechs. It has been a long time since Melkor asked a mech FROM Ves and it would be a disservice if he didn't get a "living mech" when all of his subordinates (avatars) are piloting one. Not to mention Vincent wanted Bravo and was already fascinated by luminar crystal technology.

    Ch 3518 Upcoming Custom Mechs
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    The Mech Touch
    Sci-fi · Exlor
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  • killuaxx15
    killuaxx152yr
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    Kinda disappointed that Will could be assassinated and was even kidnapped before so easily. He appears too weak as a disciple of a very powerful master.

    Ch 156 Assassination Attempt II
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    Rise of a Finance Minister
    Fantasy · Silver_1_Phoenix
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  • killuaxx15
    killuaxx152yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter! I just hope Will will learn a lot of new and more powerful spells from his master. He already missed a lot from not attending the academy and helping in the war.

    Ch 125 City Administrator and Planner
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  • killuaxx15
    killuaxx152yr
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    When did he advance a year?

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    Rise of a Finance Minister
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  • killuaxx15
    killuaxx152yr
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    Thanks for the chapter!

    Ch 47 End of Term Results
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  • killuaxx15
    killuaxx152yr
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    Hi author, I recommend using Grammarly to improve grammatical and spelling errors. It is free and could really help improve your writing.

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  • killuaxx15
    killuaxx152yr
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    Thanks for this chapter! I know this novel has a romantic subplot tag but I hope it wouldn't become the focus of the story. The chapters about his planning and working his merchant dream interest me the most about this novel. I am already curious whether he'll become a traveling merchant or just a boss in an office type of merchant.

    Ch 45 Beast Wave Boss
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    Rise of a Finance Minister
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  • killuaxx15
    killuaxx152yr
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    Shouldn't there be a huge power gap between a journeyman and a grandmaster? How can a golem even empowered with Gaia's blessing be able to restrain a grandmaster level beast? That level should be similar to his master's level, right? And where are the other cadets and instructors, why is no one helping Will fight this beast wave?

    Ch 45 Beast Wave Boss
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    Rise of a Finance Minister
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  • killuaxx15
    killuaxx152yr
    Replied to killuaxx15

    I know this novel deserves 5 stars but I deducted a star for the grammatical and spelling mistakes. Though story-wise, this novel deserves full marks.

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    Rise of a Finance Minister
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  • killuaxx15
    killuaxx152yr
    Posted

    This novel is a gem. The story is about a young man dreaming to become a merchant in a Medieval world with knights, mages, nobles, and other races. So far, I am currently loving the school arc, though I hope the story would progress faster so that he could finally start his journey as a merchant. I like how not everything went according to his plans, but by using his intelligence and resources, he makes those problems into his opportunities. My only problem would be about the grammatical and spelling errors. Though I can live with it as long as I can understand the message. And I know 13 yrs old is considered adult in the novel but I think 17 or 18 are more acceptable ages when he start growing his business. Since people could live past 100 years old in this novel so I often think a 13 yr old is still a kid. Lastly, I would like to thank the author for this wonderful novel. I wish I could read more chapters because I really like the story. More chapters of him growing as a merchant than fighting would also be much appreciated.

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    Rise of a Finance Minister
    Fantasy · Silver_1_Phoenix
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  • killuaxx15
    killuaxx152yr
    Commented

    Isn't it better to call them Nascent Soul experts or experts than just "soldiers"? I feel that calling them soldiers is too low for their position and strength.

    The two soldiers from the commanders side also saw the current situation and both of them moved over to where Wang Hu and Wang Lan were standing.
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    Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough
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