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Hello123565mthReplied to whyISmyPEEredCus the guy replied to me.
"...cough, nothing really, just getting your pass"- Hello123561yrReplied to DaoistLhcXCS
Og from beginning in that lightning place. He saw the MC breakthrough to foundation establishment
[Your good friend Mo Fuchou was attacked by a righteous cultivator] x3028 - Hello123561yrCommented
looooooooool. Satisfying.
"I don't think the 2nd Prince is being too modest. You need 200 years to even enter the Qiyao Realm. Your talent is indeed average. I have no interest in taking someone with such ordinary talent as my disciple. Please leave," Qin Chen sneered. - Hello123561yrCommented"I've heard that the Elder King of the Taiyi Holy Land killed the Demonic Venerable Yang Tiancheng and that his cultivation is unparalleled," The 8th Imperial Prince said seriously, "I'm here to pay a visit to the Elder King. I wonder if brother Lu is willing to invite the Elder King on my behalf for a chat."
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System is the ultimate wingman
[Zixia Heaven-ascending Sutra: A peerless ancient Sutra created for the Zixia Body. It's an internal ancient Sutra created by the Supreme Zixia Empress. If one cultivates this Sutra, they will be able to fully develop the Zixia Body and reach the peak, obtaining the hope of becoming an Emperor that has proven their path.] - Hello123561yrCommented
This is my exact birthday literally the same?! Crazy
Putting on my glasses for nearsightedness and looking at the date on the clock I can see: It is January 21, 2004, my birthday, I will be 16 today. And my parents are coming to pick me up and we are going to eat something I like at 7 PM, so I slept in the afternoon, to have more energy. - Hello123561yrCommented"HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA YOU ARE TELLING ME THAT A GOD WANTS TO EMPLOY ME?! A MORTAL?! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA" even his light body couldn't remain on the sitting position anymore he rolled through the void laughing like a maniac.
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So how is he gonna explain how he knows all this?? The only thing I can think of is one of his constructs saw it when it was scouting.
"Well, you'll see." I spoke. "But we still have a lot to do here." - Hello123561yrCommented
Mfs complaining all the time wanting op characters in every novel smh
Deviants can absorb eternals' power… which means they can absorb eternals' cosmic energy… which means that they can absorb other animals' tiny cosmic energy as well! And they evolved because of it! - Hello123561yrCommented
"It's like we're husband and wife or something."
Bruh… 'I need to go see the girls now'? We're like husband and wife or something... - Hello123561yrReplied to Plagiarism"You tolerated my selfishness earlier when I said that I wanted to study the animals in the savannah, so… it's the least I could do."
- Hello123561yrReplied to Anthony_Jordan_9477"Is that human alright?" I asked Thena that question. "Why are we helping them any-"
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Maidenless behaviour
"Well, nice try..." I said, "But don't do it again." - Hello123561yrCommented
No offense but the reason the dialogue feels so unnatural is because you're trying to tell us about the MC's personality through the dialogue instead letting us see it through his actions. Like bringing up the fact that one of his traits is sarcasm/ earlier he was constantly being told about being creepy or whatever. We can infer that from the interactions we don't need to be told he is being sarcastic explicitly because nobody says "I'm sarcastic? Oh well" like he could've just smirked or somat and then we the readers can pick up on it. Or when you're trying to say he is creepy just say people are uncomfortable around him or they visibly recoil or shift around instead of "you're creepy you know" because we can formulate that opinion on our own. If that makes sense idk I kinda went off on a tangent.
"Really? I don't remember being sarcastic…" I mumbled, and shrugged. "Oh well." - Hello123561yrCommented
Idk if it's just me but this dialogue feels so forced and unnatural.
"Oh, Ha Ha Sprite, cancel your Illusion." I rolled my eyes. - Hello123561yrCommented
Ayo?
Shi Yu's heart skipped a beat as he looked at the handsome wolf strangely. - Hello123562yrReplied to Bragft
Omg what will I ever do? A reply on a webnovel app has more likes than mine 💀Dumba**
Those were the last words he heard before he felt his connection with the puppet disappear. - Hello123562yrCommented
Called it
It obviously didn't matter that the 'lizard' was put into a coma because the 'lizard' had undergone its evolution process, taking a whole week to do so. Well, not that it mattered. Most life forms, especially the beast race - slept when they were evolving, so her coma induced state might have even been a help. - Hello123562yrCommented
I bet it's a female cus I know how this sh*t goes
'THIS THING IS ACTUALLY USING MY PRIMORDIAL ESSENCE TO CHANGE THE PROPERTIES OF THE LAWS OF DESTRUCTION?!' - Hello123562yrReplied to TheRandomFemaleFan𝟐𝟎𝟎𝟎 𝐲𝐞𝐚𝐫𝐬 𝐥𝐚𝐭𝐞𝐫