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I am me.
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Cus the guy replied to me.
Og from beginning in that lightning place. He saw the MC breakthrough to foundation establishment
looooooooool. Satisfying.
System is the ultimate wingman
This is my exact birthday literally the same?! Crazy
So how is he gonna explain how he knows all this?? The only thing I can think of is one of his constructs saw it when it was scouting.
Mfs complaining all the time wanting op characters in every novel smh
"It's like we're husband and wife or something."
Maidenless behaviour
No offense but the reason the dialogue feels so unnatural is because you're trying to tell us about the MC's personality through the dialogue instead letting us see it through his actions. Like bringing up the fact that one of his traits is sarcasm/ earlier he was constantly being told about being creepy or whatever. We can infer that from the interactions we don't need to be told he is being sarcastic explicitly because nobody says "I'm sarcastic? Oh well" like he could've just smirked or somat and then we the readers can pick up on it. Or when you're trying to say he is creepy just say people are uncomfortable around him or they visibly recoil or shift around instead of "you're creepy you know" because we can formulate that opinion on our own. If that makes sense idk I kinda went off on a tangent.
Idk if it's just me but this dialogue feels so forced and unnatural.
Ayo?
Omg what will I ever do? A reply on a webnovel app has more likes than mine 💀Dumba**
Called it
I bet it's a female cus I know how this sh*t goes