This has already been made its called golden viper here on web novel. Go look for it in the fanfiction listing................................

Hey author have you thought of a p a t re o n? Like 15-20 chapters ahead of this for like 5 bucks?

last 10 chaps feel like filler that could have been done in 3

and dropped :D thanks for basically just going the book route now I don't have to waste my time trash author go back to fanfict.com loser

a lot of these chapters are starting to feel like filler bs

You need to edit the layout

author you good?

where is the release

I gonna be honest here after reading first 200 chapters. The forced tragedy for a guy who on earth before his reincarnation was top tier in a mafia family but somehow and some weird reason he decided not to use that prior knowledge to get his situation better from the beginning? This is honestly dumb as f*** development not sure how this is ranked as high on the story dev side of things when it's all forced bs

YURI NTR and somehow you think saving it is Xing being "sure fine whatever" after 100 chapters showing that is not the personality he has lmao trash author seriously ran out of ideas

I'm gonna be completely honest this reads so bad that I don't understand how webnovel allows this to go through. Sadly most of the current trials are pretty bad this time around

Great novel......love how you aren't letting readers opinions affect the novels plot line. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Good writing Story is great Character design awesome Updates are everyday but would be nice to have some type of mass release 3-5 chapters every now and then. Even if p.a.tr.e.o.n goal is needed.

Why is this locked at 15? Makes no sense since its suppose to be a free 19 chapters read....Webnovel trying to scam for more money then drop translations on novel like always GG.

Change is natural

Really 8 chapters then the paywall starts? Who are the idiots reviewing stories for the site that think this is ok? No wonder other 3rd party sites are starting to be higher up on the google list when I look up stories, everyone and their mother are pirating these stories to other sites for free. I for one am ok with this; stupid people deserve stupid solutions.

Sorry but chapter 10 just kills it for me sadly....read some reviews about it and didn't think it was gonna be a deal breaker but come on really? Cliché lazy way of writing it that way...Will keep reading and update if I ever feel like it got better but for now this is just a random read when chapters are piled up.

This is literally just a copy and paste of another trial novel a few weeks back....like full 20 chapters the plot and scenario is literally the same? Is this what the site is coming to? No new ideas just copies?

So literally 0 chapters and some how the bots coming out to post 5 star useless reviews especially when another trial has basically this same concept?

yea dropped this story is all over the place with details that im like 99% sure we didnt need to this point....goodluck on novel i guess