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pari0913

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  • pari09133 years ago
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    This novel started off really well, even the world and character building is pretty good. After he went to the five element world the second time, this novel's down fall started. The amount fillers is insane, it put even MGA to shame. This is the first novel I have read where the MC is still stuck in the impoverished starting place even at chapter 600. MC faces no setbacks for his idiotic decisions. I think his life spirit should have died when it got kidnapped to sparrows village. Certain places the MC should be there and not in training like during the mercenary guild meeting all the powers. Author needs to improve his creativity. Currently this novel is mediocre at best and will frustrate you most of the time. Only time will tell if it gets back to its best.

  • pari09133 years ago
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

  • pari09133 years ago
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

  • pari09133 years ago
    Posted

    Writing quality was better at the start and it is slowly degrading as the chapters increase. The story is really good but grammatical errors are killing it. My brain hurts everytime I read this, atleast use grammarly while writing.

  • pari09133 years ago
    Commented

    Reading a book with bad English makes my head hurt even if its somewhat good.

  • pari09134 years ago
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    I thought her children were only unconscious, what happened to them?