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GrimMorta1yrCommented*flourish once more
" I know some of you want to stay on this planet to protect our planet to the very end but I'm making a way our species can survive, in the unfortunate circumstance we lose the war, our species will find a way to survive and flusher once more, ' The man stopped talking before sighing deeply and shaking his head...- GrimMorta1yrCommented
*did he go crazy or *mabye he went crazy
" as he went crazy like his father. " - GrimMorta1yrCommented
this section down to the ~~~ should not be here. it makes more sense for it to be in the section above. or at least distinctly separate it from king vegeta's POV.
I'm really going to die, I've just got here damn it - GrimMorta1yrCommented
enchantress?
2.Love Interest: Who would be the best? I don't want to wait 1500 years for Loki to meet her. I was recommended Hela, but the problem with that is that it would completly change the way I want the plot to go ad Hela hates Odin. Sif idk and there is also the Ancient One who is old enought. Idk what do you think? - GrimMorta1yrCommented
no TVA
1.TVA: should I add it? It is the key point to king's dynasty but honestly idk if Kang will play a part in this story. Also TVA is something that would make everything confusing. - GrimMorta1yrReplied to SnowApathie
... you do know that the Roman's and norse had little to no contact with each other, Right? the norse are not secretly roman and thor is not secretly zeus. so while to yes Nótt and Nyx are similar, that's mostly just because they are both the personification of night. but if you were to take a closer look, they are very clearly separate entities in mythology. But I digress, the point is that it was the mythologically incorrect deity to be cited. even if you consider this is marvel where both mythos exist, they are two separate countries, it'd be like saying "America is safe and will continue to prosper as long as Putin is president", it just makes no sense for anybody to say that.
Loki let out a small sigh of resignation and also closed his eyes, falling into Hypnos' gentle arms. - GrimMorta1yrCommented
Nótt, she's the norse goddess of sleep and is considered the personification of night.
Loki let out a small sigh of resignation and also closed his eyes, falling into Hypnos' gentle arms. - GrimMorta1yrReplied to GrimMorta
look up "blowback effect" anlong with glass or window if your interested. I'm to lazy to write it multiple times to see what to change.
"Anyone with brains could see that the so-called Mrs. Andrew's clearly pranked the police. First the police must have been sure that Mrs. Andrew's has lied to them because someone had broken the glass window from inside. If the window was broken from outside, little pieces of glass would be on the room's floor. But she had broken it from inside, and glass pieces were outside, as simple as ABC. Am I right, or am I right?" - GrimMorta1yrCommented
... I literally just spent five minutes explaining why his answer was incorrect and I got 5h@!)0b@n3!)...
"Anyone with brains could see that the so-called Mrs. Andrew's clearly pranked the police. First the police must have been sure that Mrs. Andrew's has lied to them because someone had broken the glass window from inside. If the window was broken from outside, little pieces of glass would be on the room's floor. But she had broken it from inside, and glass pieces were outside, as simple as ABC. Am I right, or am I right?" - GrimMorta1yrCommented
my vote
This book has been deleted. - GrimMorta1yrCommented
....that's kinda sad...
He muttered for the last time as his entire existence turned to dust and small particles of light in the vast space of emptiness and darkness. With that, the forgotten god who had existed for eons, is no more. - GrimMorta1yrCommented
humped humped humped
Raditz humped at that, looking at cyborg Tao doing his best Yamcha impression, he spat. - GrimMorta1yrReplied to Nicolas_Bahamondes
??? I'm confused, are you telling yourself to stop b!@tching about it and read?
"Takeda-sensei? He groped Akane, for which he got a punch from me and a kick in the balls from her" Alduin replied, leaving out the part where it was due to Akane's trip that the PE teacher fell on her. - GrimMorta1yrCommented
if I saw one of the homies sent this in the chat, I'd think he'd be tryin' out a toaster bath
MC - [Hey, this wont make a lot of sense and I cant explain, but I just want to say I'm sorry for being such an idiot... I should have listened to you all. Thanks for everything, goodbye.] - GrimMorta1yrReplied to Pektas
I forgot the "E" in there.
Profession: Teacher, doctor, scientist, military man, policeman ... - GrimMorta1yrReplied to BiazarKaiser
I mean, they did it in "reverend insanity".
"The Gender Bender potion will fix him?" I asked dryly and the squirrel hurriedly nodded... - GrimMorta1yrPosted
soooo.... I see you deleted the story. explains why I couldn't find it anywhere... *sigh* so yeah, I don't know why you deleted it and I'm not going to ask since its quite frankly none of my business, BUT I still feel compelled to ask you. you wouldn't happen to have those chapters laying around somewhere, would you? (F[_](!<, who I'm I kidding your probably not even on the site anymore. even if you were you probably don't even use this account). welp, goodbye. I guess.
This book has been deleted. - GrimMorta1yrCommented
+1
Vote here for having all POVs in one chapter when we do have more than one - GrimMorta1yrReplied to M_Zero09This paragraph has been deleted.