Mao Qi

i mean one of the Prusian menister's with no translation and the name was Du Qi or Duo Qi and it shuld be Mauch (but that maks no sense aither it shuld be "Otto Theodor Freiherr von Manteuffel" ) Ps: i put the last commant in the wrong chapter PPs: my first language isn't english

Mu Qi should be Mr. Mauch

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Propaganda?

put the images and links in the comment's plz!!!

thx for the chapter

Oh ok then never mind and good job. Thx for the clarification.

if you want to make the story successful then you need to make the chapters longer (its like reeding one page of a comic/manga or a 5 secend clip) now it's hard to impossible to emorse in to the story. otherwise great work

thx for the chapter and use the Dragon Ball's to turn him in to a Saiyan. At least that's what I would do if I were the MC.

Rias Gremory is disgusting (Personality / not looks)

why is the MC yelling and shouting all the time is he 5? and thx for the chapter

I thought that the MC should be intelligent? why is he acting like an idiot chinese gangster?

put the images and links in the comment's plz!!!

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if you want to make the story successful then you need to make the chapters longer (its like reeding one page of a comic/manga or a 5 secend clip) now it's hard to impossible to emorse in to the story. otherwise great work

why not make him a Kahn era Augment (star trek) or a Terminator hybrid like Marcus Wright from Terminator Salvation? you know something new

put the images and links in the comment's plz!!!

put the images and links in the comment's plz!!!

put the images and links in the comment's plz!!!