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Good day. Just wanted to ask if his chest has been abandoned since he has not leveled up dragon slaying magic for the past 2 years now. And when is he going to one piece again?

7yrs old Luffy speaks of Zoro and Ussop like he has known Dem for years. are you sure the year is 1509 and not 1529?

First person POV has changed the story style for me. Can't get that same vibe it had before

A full chapter and Lucci is still not down? Are you giving the guy too much credit? I know hes's STRONG and all buh... Anyway great work, keep feeding us. Thank you for the chapter

the ages doesn't match. Shisui was older than Itachi and you're making Kazuki the same age as Kushina then when will he give birth to Shisui. In fact he should even be older than Mikoto and about the same age as Fukagu

I enjoyed the story, savoured it even buh his death left me feeling incomplete. Even with his final gift he shouldn't have died. Buh great work. Kudos to you . I hope your next is as interesting as this. Thank you

so Naruto does not exist inn this fanfiction coz I've not heard him being mentioned before. There's no way He'll be in the village for years now and have not heard of Naruto if he existed.

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yes

There is no need for Harem. Just imagine God doing what will make others fall from grace. pick one Ii think maybe Hecate or Hestia. one represents magic and the other Family/Home.