Sneeky_Jake

what is this from looks familiar but I cant place it

respect to author for giving an objective review of his work instead of 5stars and telling people not to review poorly because of stated reasons like 99% of junk on here

kinda hoping that's the case and we get another Alea pov

tftc, keep it up author, also you should take some time for him to situate himself in the main world and bond with musume girls before he gets sent to another again

akame ga kill

akame ga kill is a pretty solid world with some good waifus

p.s. as for having any ideas, I would just say to include Smith as you've already set up for it as well as just about all the other girls now that he is back. also try not to keep him separated from his other girls for 2 long, maybe 1 or 2 other worlds worth of chapters, idk how long you're intending this to go on for.

wb, and tftc, keep up the good work author, by comparison to many novels on here this one grammatically has very few mistakes and spelling errors. I love where we are headed with this. just the beginning of demolus' pokemon journey.

not to nitpick but again, although they dont go over 100 his racial and class levels add up to over 90 while level 80

no I was talking about his racial and job classes listed in this chapter, they add to over 100 even if you dont include dragons rage which I assume is a racial ability and not class based on its name and the fact it's not listed in parentheses, if any of those listed are abilities and no actual class or racial levels they should be listed in a different form.