Ayer52

It should be a Stray Devil, not a Fallen Angel

This whole thing with the MC is way too drawn out. Over 10 chapters with him being absent from the story is boring, especially because it’s just background canon of the engagement. I think this is where I leave the story, good luck with the rest, I enjoyed most of it up until chapter 20.

Definitely, I would give stones for bonus chapters

This chapter killed it for me. It was already established that the simulator wouldn’t affect real life and yet now a character had a dream where they remember the life that happened in the simulation.

Please don’t follow canon and have Thalia end up as a tree. With Lucian there, he should be able to prevent anything bad like that from happening.

I hope Tiamat doesn’t end up with Bahamut. I’m not a fan of when the MC is being manipulated, so I want him to reject Tiamat completely.

I get that you are introducing new characters and showing that despite his power increase he is still weak, but be careful of having characters show up too much that completely overpower your MC. It can get annoying if the MC is looked down on too much and he can’t do anything about it yet. Other than that I’m enjoying the story and the growth he Cao Cao is showing.

Is it just me or is the story now moving at a snails pace? Each chapter lately has been mostly filled with inner dialogue or over explanations that don’t move the story forward.

I feel the same way, the story has been slowing down a great deal. Then again I’m not a fan of story arcs where the MC hides his identity so maybe it’s just me.

Even though it was part of his plans, they should fuck over Frozen Cloud. I never liked them in the original story