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Loophus

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  • Loophus
    Loophus3mth
    Commented

    think i might take a rain check on this one until there's a lot more chaps or the chaps get way longer the story is starting kinda slow or fast its really hard for me to tell

    Ch 5 Chapter 5: Power up!
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    Superman in the Invincible universe
    Anime & Comics · Imad_Nfaouy
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  • Loophus
    Loophus5mth
    Replied to kiwami803

    na faith wouldn't work for him considering the draw backs with it it would be better if he becomes a natural God through training and just gathering more power

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  • Loophus
    Loophus5mth
    Commented

    I thought he gained the ability of the servants not summon them why do every DC and marvel fanfic have to summon people from other universe's there's enough characters in DC that there shouldn't even be a need for it in the first place

    Ch 2 First Summon
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    DC/Young Justice: FATE
    Anime & Comics · a_BMO
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  • Loophus
    Loophus6mth
    Replied to javi299

    a made up word that is thrown around and used like a insult it all nonsense don't pay attention to it

    (A.N. I don't hate other genders, it's just that can you please not force your views and beliefs to others?, One time I was sitting at a park and then some random person sat next to me and called me cisman seductively, at the time I did not know what cisman meant, the people around us were laughing even my friend was laughing, so I thought he was making fun of me.)
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    ONE PIECE: SIGN IN
    Anime & Comics · Rin_Mori
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  • Loophus
    Loophus6mth
    Commented

    and like that completely turned a cool read into trash

    "Nadin for now you are just a lowly slave but serve me well and I might elevate you maybe even bestowing abilities and knowledge so that you can be more than what you are"
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    New life with a sci-fi system
    Others · Guardian1
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  • Loophus
    Loophus6mth
    Replied to Loophus

    I was wrong she indeed changed auther had me in the beginning there took my words and destroyed them

    "Iruka sensei! Why aren't you punishing them!" Sakura screeched while pointing at the two troublemakers.
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    Naruto: The Right Way To Become Hokage
    Anime & Comics · some_writer
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  • Loophus
    Loophus6mth
    Commented

    couldn't make her better instead just make her worse. Sasuke isn't even in the picture so there shouldn't even be a reason for her to be acting like this

    "Iruka sensei! Why aren't you punishing them!" Sakura screeched while pointing at the two troublemakers.
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    Naruto: The Right Way To Become Hokage
    Anime & Comics · some_writer
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  • Loophus
    Loophus6mth
    Commented

    did you say two chapters ago that he didn't come and his was Alice mothere that to his spot

    From Hachiman's sprint to the beach, the entire process of rescuing Alice and returning took no more than a minute.
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    Life As Hikigaya Hachiman
    Anime & Comics · Leonzky
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  • Loophus
    Loophus6mth
    Replied to 123r97

    na it's more like he already is getting skill,items,and other thing summoning pets would be cool but the main thing is it's the world of marvel summoning anime characters to it is kinda meh when you already have hundred of characters it takes away from what people are actually here for which is said in the title "marvel" not what ever the auther planned to add with the summoning characters gacha in my option it's really not needed

    Then I can absorb or assimilate the characters, gaining their powers or summon them to be my subordinates, lovers, mentors, friends, bros, etc.
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    Meta Essence Gacha in Marvel
    Anime & Comics · EvansKannon
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  • Loophus
    Loophus6mth
    Commented

    just curious why this time period

    Gender: Male D.O.B:10 July 1920
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    A Sage in Marvel
    Anime & Comics · naruto6667
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  • Loophus
    Loophus6mth
    Commented

    to many mistakes in the text to even want to comprehend what is actually happening and there plenty of girls and you could try to add other girls from the other level series they could fit in easily considering their pretty much the same or close to it

    Ch 5 Chapter 5 .Meeting with president
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    God of Thunder thor with system
    Movies · preet_dhaliwal8077
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  • Loophus
    Loophus6mth
    Commented

    Odin son is a part of his name its not a title

    Title - odin son , 35 more 
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    God of Thunder thor with system
    Movies · preet_dhaliwal8077
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  • Loophus
    Loophus7mth
    Replied to crimsoncobra97

    it's dc it isn't supposed to be realistic

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    Life Can Change || DC x Invincible Fic
    Anime & Comics · TheManUnderTheBed
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  • Loophus
    Loophus7mth
    Commented

    no nope na

    Ch 4 month hiatus
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    Is it wrong for a guardian to find exotics in a dungeon?
    Anime & Comics · Guardian_of_Emiya
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  • Loophus
    Loophus7mth
    Commented

    young schools 5: northrim

    "Alright, this game is called Dragon Scrolls 5: Northrim. It'll keep you occupied until I can get you enrolled in Kuoh Academy," Issei explained.
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    DxD: The Dragon Oppai
    Anime & Comics · Orael
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  • Loophus
    Loophus7mth
    Replied to Fredmoney07

    i agree with ghost ☝️but I also think a true alpha doesn't need to defend his stance you go fredmoney

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    Naruto : Pure Blood
    Anime & Comics · Devils_hand
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  • Loophus
    Loophus7mth
    Posted

    first chapter is the interdiction to the story he spend the next 4 chapters with the start in the dungeon and chapter 6 he gets out of the dungeon and talking to the guild receptionistlittle to no background until it was randomly said he was a half elf and there was a whole beginning that was not even mentioned at all in the beginning it's a really bad mtl people need to stop doing fanfiction mtl work there all if not most always have bad grammar or the weird code that Fries the brain cells with the Chinese way of talking idk

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  • Loophus
    Loophus7mth
    Commented

    a little disappointed

    Ch 6 Chapter 06
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    Saiyan in Smallville
    Anime & Comics · MeliodasTempest
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  • Loophus
    Loophus7mth
    Commented
    "Ahh.... Now i know that your mind is twisted and it won't understand my words, hence I will teach you in the language you understand," sighed Kenichi "Take off your glasses. I don't want you to go blind because of a single punch from me"
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    Rebirth Of The Mightiest Disciple (Reboot)
    Anime & Comics · shashank_bhatt
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  • Loophus
    Loophus7mth
    Commented

    so I read through this and I gotta say I don't mind genderbent Luffy but why is the personality so different like I can understand making her a little different because it's a she but like this isn't Luffy anymore it's a completely different character altogether and I'd change about her knowing the fruit even in one piece they don't even know how many there are and just make it a new unknown type it'd make it more interesting and less bland

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