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Airdurian3mthCommentedyeah, here we go again. Some random thing will happen to fill the story
After he reached level 9 in constitution, no matter how hard he trains his body seemed to have no improve whatsoever as if he has reached a bottleneck.- Airdurian4mthCommented
How about this
Since our good spear boy is growing up, he's going to need a look and I'm unsure whether or not I should use the same grown-up look he has in DXD or change it up a bit. - Airdurian8mthCommented
I appreciate your work and want to give some input. When doing other characters POV just focus on their thoughts and just don't repeat the same information over and over again. For example, when talking about how MC can beat a man when he was 9 years old, just give the conclusion not the detail. Hope this helps you my friend!!!
But if you think it's boring then just give me a tip on how to change it and what I should rather write about. Just telling me that it's boring doesn't help me or the story. - Airdurian1yrReplied to Daoist882016
usually in some country there is government program that target orphan, but it should not able cover all orphan out there. There is even some people that corrupt this program.
[Lin Shen, who came from a welfare institute and had to rely on official subsidies for his tuition and living expenses, was very lacking in all four aspects. - Airdurian1yrCommented
Bombastic side eye !!!!
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Boiled Waterrrrrrrr
Sikong Ya said coldly, "You're lucky. You drank boiling water and didn't get poisoned." - Airdurian1yrReplied to ThanatosGreekGod
Bro just, turn off your brain and enjoy the ride.... I learned it from the hard way (Reading utterly stupid novel with 2000+chapter more)
"You died from Qi Deviation. Comprehension +1!" - Airdurian1yrCommentedCh 10 Some Electrocution Will Teach You Manners
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let him cook!
Chucksley then smiled, very satisfied with the skills that Katsuki had shown. He then looked at Katsuki who closed his eyes. A quiet period ensued for a little while. It was like the calm before the storm. - Airdurian1yrReplied to LostEra
bro, if you read this kind of novel you need to deactivate your brain cell. Don't torture yourself by using logic. Just enjoy the ride :)
"You are in a happy mood. After comprehending the benefits of seclusion, and that there are all sorts of fun to be discovered within, you have received the reward of the seven-colored divine light." - Airdurian1yrCommented
Author, pleas at least try to contact Oda to get confirmation (｀・ω・´)
Garp still had his physical strength, but he could no longer use haki properly because of the seastone, so he was stuck there now. - Airdurian1yrReplied to killersoul
yeah, at the end the wars only the leaders of Village who will be benefited and the soldiers(ninja) were just a Sacrificial pawn.
After Yusuke's words, Hazuki's face showed sadness: "So many people died in this war, I knew many of them. I really don't understand why people fight... Haa anyway, I'm powerless here, our world is too dangerous, you have to promise your mom to be careful." - Airdurian1yrReplied to WebReaderPub
welp better prepare for the I.R.S then
"May, this isn't about us not having enough money or anything like that. I thought game development was interesting, so I started studying up on it and thought making a game would be fun. The reason I started with a mobile game is that it's an easy starting point. As for the pay-to-win aspect, I just thought it would be an easy way to make money. Maybe pay for college and start a savings account for the future." Peter tries to placate May's worries. - Airdurian1yrCommented
here we go again~
[Congratulations User. You have been chosen to reincarnate with a system to another world.] - Airdurian2yrReplied to Narcissist_
Burrnnnnnnnn!!!!
"Hm. What Ito said was not unreasonable. the bearded old man nodded, "Because of the appearance of the golden list, the pirates in the world are a little too high-profile, and that Hawkeye is also, who even refused to heed the call of the world government to temporarily hand over his sword to us for safekeeping. Perhaps it would be a good thing to let the world know more about our power. " [Tl/n: Wow, just wow. Lol] - Airdurian2yrReplied to Daoist607078
dunze
"Haha!! Worry not, he's been waiting for Sensei to die so that he could become Hokage. He would definitely agree" - Airdurian2yrReplied to Ototsu_Yume
bro that's sound awesome if you had calculated it.
This book has been deleted. - Airdurian2yrReplied to wisdomkeeper
Lmao, that legend hair...
This book has been deleted. - Airdurian2yrReplied to TearsofThings
They didn't dare to change the plot to much, because Mushoku Tensei plot is to much for them to handle the chaos. So they use the cliche where the mc didn't know where he was to make the fanfic proggesion managable. I have read one where The MC read mushoku tensei and have a lot inspiration from other anime to apply in his world, and I must say the fanfic didn't go well.
Could I have been born in a witches' community somewhere deep in the forest? Rather, if I'm even still on Earth, then there's no way I'm still in the 21st century right? Might I have been reborn in the past, where it turns out magic was real and still thriving?