Yaudheya

Fyr was really like “SIKE”

This author has pretty good writing quality and updating stability, along with pretty consistent characters that are being developed well. There’s a lot of world building going on that I am finding a bit hard to follow because of a lot of new vocabulary. It’s starting to make sense after all these chapters, but it could have been done differently in the beginning to make it easier to understand all the terminology. The story also doesn’t really get very engaging until after chapter 12. Interesting concept though, so I’m looking forward to reading more chapters and seeing what the author does with this.

Really good quality writing, and the chapters seem to be coming out pretty regularly so far. The story is really dark and gory, so if you like that stuff then this is the novel for you. It’s a little bit too much for me, hence why I reduced one star from story development. I will continue reading because of the unique aspect of this story and to see where it goes.

Very nice

Still pretty early on in the book, but the writing quality is really good. The author uses a lot of metaphors/fancy words which adds to the imagery, but I sometimes need to Google what things mean so not 5/5. Updating consistently so far so that's nice. Seems like the story hit the ground running so I'm not sure exactly what the backstory is but it seems like the author might be keeping a lot of things mysterious on purpose. I didn't realize this was an R18 book until I read a few chapters in and noticed some quite descriptive scenes. A good book nonetheless. Really seems to be focusing more on the plot/mystery than just being R18.

Give this guy a Grammy, his acting skills above and beyond

Didn't he also want to protect Urul?

As they should tsk tsk tsk

He's just mad he was called out

Cedric probably wanted to say "in" rather than "behind" but he's too regal to drop that low