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I'll be honest, I've been looking for a good oshi no ko fanfic, but most of them don't seem to understand the characters correctly and when they express their own vision the character is lost (in this case ruby/aqua/ai's relationship with the MC) and this fanfic is no exception. On the other hand, the author seems to be guided more by his own musical tastes, which he includes in an incongruous way. (starts singing in English and then switches to Korean) Keep it in Japanese!!! If he is successful in his musical career he will obviously evolve to sing in English... It may sound harsh, but it is true, this fanfic has good writing, but it seems to lose coherence with each chapter, I hope it is fixed, because the basic idea is fantastic.
good start, but the song he sings disappoints me a little, in my opinion there is no type of agreement with what he wants to reflect, there could be better songs that better correlate the feelings or emotions of the concert. On the other hand, is he supposed to also speak Korean or is it just the magic of the script? How does that song sound in Japanese? does anyone know?
Even talented people can take a lifetime to learn an art, but no, he does it very quickly. (:V) I understand that they want to express their fantasies, but if you want to offer something different at least be reasonable in what you want to give, if the anime was already a fantasy, this raised it to a new level, in a bad way.
It's been a while since I found a good One Piece Fanfic, until I came across this one, without a doubt a good story, a constant development and visible growth in the protagonist based on effort and with a somewhat curious but nostalgic cheat. 10/10[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
A well-structured climax and quite an emotional send-off, this is certainly a fanfiction with some soul and good writing. Thank you for this new story, because for me it is better than the original story.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
It seems that most fanfic writers don't know how to start an adventure :v I was satisfied only with the first ability :( I thought, maybe, I will interfere with the canon and look for opportunities to be more powerful or for sure experiment things with his body to power up or other things, but no, the author decided to give him more powers.