Yeah, the ones now are way better than before. I don´t know how many times I have gone through the first five chapters because of mistakes and so on.

Actually, there were two. The one that we know was a dragon slayer that killed the original and Tool his name

Yeah, my bad. Ok, Vulcan is Emrissen‘s husband and Aversia is their child.

Yeah, i have no excuse for that… sorry

Not sure, but if she were, than it will take a long time. I won‘t spoil more

Sry, scratch that. No, Irene doesn’t have the seed inside her. But she is asking the two half dragons for help, because she expects that there will be changes because of the dragon magic and they are the only ones with a similar situation

No, but she is still a part of the battle, because it is so important.

The Acnologia that we know has taken over the name of a dragon he killed. This original Acnologia is the one that I mean

Yes

yeah, wasn´t specific enough, i meant demons that were formed naturally. Although it was never specified in cannon what the demons of the island really are, in this version they are demons that are the result of people being corrupted through demonic energy for multiple generations. By naturall demons i meant demons that were formed by the negativ energy.

oh, right... totally forgot that part.

Oh god dammit, i knew that it was wrong.... As for the lenght of the chapter, without my commentary at the end, it was around 1,7k words long, although a good part was Mirajane telling her past. Not much happened and the last few chapters had been longer than usual. The last chapter last week was around 3k words, so yeah, a bit short.

Agreed. But i think that the main reason for that was how they redeemed him, if you want to call it a redemption in the first place, and how Erza reacted to it. At the beginning, she was ready to kill him, to skin him alive for what he had done to Simon, but as soon as she realized that he had lost his memories and the remnant feelings that he had for her, she made a complete 180° change. After wards Jellal was always like, 'I need to atone for my sins', as if it was an excuse to not do anything and was simply just annoying. And the way that the whole situation with him, Erza, Miliana and Kagura was handled was just disapointing. There was potential in that, there really was, but it wasn´t used at all.

Also, sorry, didn‘t see your reply. Sorry!

I added one in a chapter, not Sure which one it was. Currently confirmed with Zeldaris are Aversia, Erza and Mirajane. Cana, Lisanna, Ultear, Meredy, Minerva and Flare are a big maybe, not sure. As for the canon ships, i won‘t change them, except ErzaxJellal but that should be obvious.

Do you mean couple pairings?

At least one more with Black Clover. Not sure when but before the Tenrou Island arc.

To be fair they are pretty young, especially for dragon standarts. They would represent dragons better if they had stayed a bit more with their mothers.

Sorry about that. Google translate can sometimes screw you over pretty hard. I will try to keep it simple, so that it won´t be too much of a hassle with it. Ok? Ok! The two mc´s have been mostly raised as humans. Because of the envirment in which they lived. The two are and will develope more and more their draconic characteristics and in their behavier. Mostly over time that they have to deal with their draconic side. And i think that later on in the story you can see that. I am sorry that my FF was dissapointing to you, this is my first real project in writing something like that.

Erza is weaker than the two mc´s in practically every situation, but the two didn´t ask her to train them in magic, strenght training and so on. No, they had asked her to train/tach them how to fight properly with weapons. As for why they want to do this in the first place, because they want to increase their options in combat. Also, yes Erza is wearing her amor to hide her won broken heart and weakness, but you forget that when she is introduced in the story, and i mean the cannon here, everyone has a huge amount of respect for her and a bit afraid of her, is one of the strongest members of the guild and the complete oposite of what you would call weak and afraid. Which is why it was such a shock for Natsu and Gray when meet withErza inside the tower of heaven and she was afraid, and even there she fought throught the whole tower alone. Yes, Erza´s training would be a joke compared to the torture that both Challot and Emrissen put the two mc´s though. Also, could you tell me a bit more in detail what about Lisanna and the beast situation you felt dissapointed about?