First of all thanks for the chapters! Corresponding to your question, i enjoy your story very much and am always happy seeing you uploading a new chapter. In terms of your grammar i can‘t say much, because most of the time i skim over mistakes, while it definitely feels like there are less mistakes, you still make similar ones. I myself aren‘t a native english speaker, nor did i lern english professionally except school, so i am no expert, but one thing you do often and is probably one of the most disturbing things in your story, are missing articles like „the“ or missing auxiliary(sometimes main) verbs „am, is, are, was, were“(the different forms of the verb „[to] be“) there are many more „easy“ mistakes and probably some more not so easy(which i could also do wrong), if you want some help, you could reply this comment with your discord name and then i can try and help you with some basic things.

I’m confused why this novel does get so little attention. If you’re looking for an interesting system and fantasy novel with a well thought out world background and story progression, you will find it here. There are already over 100 chapters and like every novel without a contract it‘s free, so why don‘t you just try it? Some people might find it off putting to read, because the grammar isn‘t the best. And i can understand that, but why don’t you just read over it? I mean, if you are speaking/writing with a non-native english speaker(like myself), who isn’t totally proficient in the language, but enough to communicate with, you will also just skim over the mistakes, because it’s meaning is understandable. Summary: Good points - already has many chapters; good world background and story progression; decent mc and character development; it’s free Bad point - grammar isn‘t good(some people might find it harder to immerse themself in the story, but it’s definitely good enough to understand everything) At last an advice, if you aren’t into different power/cultivating systems then this might not be something for you, but read for yourself to know better(not few system novels have several power/cultivating systems like mana, ki, etc.). Just try it and have a nice day readers!