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If saving you is a sin, I'll gladly become a sinner. - Raiden Mei
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Mei_23hCommentedReplace Yuroichi with herrr
"Shut it," his eyes then moved towards Suzuno who flinched from his glare as she took a step back, "You, you little shrimp. Just stay there and prepare your ass for me, I'll spank you so hard you'll turn into a masochist!"- Mei_1dCommented
That's why try to copy it and paste it on other things then save it like Memo. Or Microsoft Word.
AN: I was actually planning on writing another chap after this one, but for some reason this whole chap was suddenly erased!? FFUCCCKKKK! I WAS SO PISSED OFF I HESITATED ON CONTINUING THIS AND JUST DROP IT! Shit! Shit! I don't know what the fuck happened but this chapter was erased so I had to rewrite it again, I don't have time to write another chapter. - Mei_1dPosted
Writing Quality is 5/5 because Webnovel has really lowered my standards. And really, this story is more than fine compared to other fanfictions out there. The stability of Updates is 5/5 since the author uploads 1-3 Chapters a day or more when he skips someday. Story Development is 5/5 (for me) because it isn't slow nor is it fast. It doesn't have the cliche of "Boy meets girl, Girl falls in love" in this story. The Characters also stay true to their canon counterpart, unlike other stories that make them act completely OOC. The interaction of the MC and his daughter is also completely adorable. Character Design is 5/5 because... well, Webnovel has really started to lower my standards (lol). Alex (The MC) isn't shallow in approaching relationships unlike MCs in other wish-fulfillment fanfics and actually approaches it with a mature view instead of some hormonal-filled brain that wants a harem full of beautiful women. This is already a plus in my book. And like what I said in the Story Development, The author tries to make the characters stay true to their canon counterpart as much as he can and not just completely destroy their backstory. World Background is hmm... I think this is a mix of three worlds? Yuragi, Devil is a Part-Timer and Bleach if I recall correctly. I can't say much about this since there isn't really a lot of explanation yet and the MC hasn't really done anything related to exploration and stayed at the Yuragi Inn. So, can't say much about this other than let's hope that the World Background will mesh together with three worlds mixing.
- Mei_2dCommented
Nani?! Another Leo? Seriously though, both of them were once "Satan" and now both of them are also Tsundere.
He was just helping them because they are going to be his allies in the future, yes, that is all. He wasn't being kind to them. Yes. Not. At. All. - Mei_2dReplied to Silent_Moon
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She was about to fall but Alex reacted quickly and caught her, 'What's up with this cliché situation?' He thought to himself. - Mei_2dReplied to YandereWifeCh 48 Chapter 18: Time Skip!
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I'm okay with the Yuragi Tenants being added to the harem, but adding more than that will be stretching it and might ruin the story. You are treading a dangerous line author. And wow, just because the MC shows kindness to the opposite gender, people already say that Yuuna should be added.
Ch 47 Chapter 17: Sorry for the delay - Mei_2dReplied to FapEmperor
Small Harem is already hard to write. A Larger one would be much harder unless you can execute it well like the author Leixein or GloriousHunter. Harems are one of the causes of some fanfics becoming trash because alot of people wants a harem with countless women.
Judecca blinked before nodding her head, "Very well master. Judecca is grateful for master's invitation." - Mei_3dCommentedCh 42 Some kinda race
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Magic Crust nani? Is it the Bread of Heaven's Feel? Heaven's Bread?
There was a milky white star mark, which was glowing with very faint light. This is the Magic Crust of the incomplete Heaven's Feels. - Mei_7dCommented
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Grayfia chuckled at my answer. "An overprotective man like My Lord will be a great ruler. If it's you, the three factions might be able to be peaceful with each other. It might come at the cost of some females... but you can do it." - Mei_18dReplied to EverythingRelevant
Honkai Impact 3 by MiHoYo.
Side Chapter 17 - Mei_18dReplied to Rakha_Kun
That's Fallen Rosemary - Rita Rosseweisse.
Side Chapter 17 - Mei_18dReplied to Dragon15681
Well, fate of the protagonist. The characters they meet are either on the good side or the bad side. Not people who just want to live and help their family. But well it's a dog eat dog world, so we may never know how they feel.
'Now, Now, Rubia-chan you are not a killer are you? my cute champion can't just running around and killing knights who just doing their jobs!' Rubia nearly got a heart attack when she heard his voice in her head. - Mei_18dCommented
My god, a Campione fic. what a rarity and a Good author at that will be doing it. Let's just hope The date doesn't get side tracked.
"I want you to investigate something for me..." - Mei_18dCommented
And Issei was only 18 when he screwed the personification of Death.
The male Gods trying to court Setsuna... They are met with Issei's iron fist since those Gods age is in the millions while Setsuna is only 14. Calling them a lolicon is an understatement at this point. - Mei_18dCommented
Idk why I'm typing this. I just want her gear T-T
Side Chapter 17 - Mei_18dCommented
Fallen Rosemary is best Rita.
Side Chapter 17 - Mei_18dReplied to Dragon15681
Cultivators yeah. Imagine families that depend to their Cultivator relative to keep their home safe. Wonder how'd they feel?
'Now, Now, Rubia-chan you are not a killer are you? my cute champion can't just running around and killing knights who just doing their jobs!' Rubia nearly got a heart attack when she heard his voice in her head.
