raphaelodinson

yep I'm leaving cause wtf is this writing. Jesus Christ, the first chapter also

this isn't a script, it's a story. Plus aren't scripts for movies or shows, which this won't turn into. Don't say dumb shit bro

he legit gives 5 good reasons why he doesn't like your story and you just point 1 out and says some dumb stuff. No wonder you write shit because you are shit

dogshit, Mc is a slave to his system. I have never in my life read something so awful in my life. The Mc crashes out, with a good reason, and system just rewinds time, wtf. Author write better stuff or don't write at all

bro wtf are these, just write better

as someone who watched the shows, all i can say the author should watch those shows and never write anything again in his life

bro if you can't handle criticism then don't write or do anything. Everyone gets criticism, we just listen and move on. Speaking of which I've grown to dislike how the story is progressing so I'm out

wait, so as the author, someone posted an 1 star review, and you just put a laughing emoji. This responds from the author tells me everything i need to know. You aren't a writer, just a fake

Awful. Baised author. The mc has no dignity. The characters are 2 dimensional. Oh yeah the mc is a pedo

In this pokemon world, you could sell even weak pokemon for a lot of money not to mention minerals and plants you can find in the wild for example carterpie silk. I don't want my mc to have a good time while other trainers die constantly. Plus he received plenty stuff from the academy which he can sell for a lot of pokedollars.