Lets go on a journey....

Fastest human on earth 12.3 meters per second

Author your story is good but you need an editor

You could call the previous chapters a prolog. Good so far I like what you are doing

Author please take one min to find a treadmill 4km/ hr or 2mph is a very moderate walk 1 mile in 30 min or 2 km in 30 min is slow Or just Google average walking pace: 3-4 mph (6-8km/h)

So now the boy who dreamed of being free has been turned into a puppet who's will can be bent whenever his master wishes

Author please note when someone says their dream is freedom and then someone laughs in their face at them and tells them to become there subordinate it doesn't usually get a happy reaction

Author you are building a great book so far

Great book, found it and read it in a day, I will check out the authors other works. I suggest reading it for anyone who likes evolution, non human mc , and fast strength gain