she's a good hacker so why is she easily deceived? with her hidden identities and smartness portrayed why is she scheme against? it already shows contradiction to the FL characters. I mean, she already got two hidden identities while being in high school so why a small scheme pass through?

I'm sorry author, i don't give power stone if there is no new chapter release 😁

I'm sure Lili is the killer, also, why can't Yudong simply use her power to track the culprit with her spiritual power as a guide like before.

The flow of the story is good and it's concept is interesting, but the grammar is not that good. Maybe you can try to improve your English more, it's just my thought hope your not offended, and I know you're trying because everyone does right? 😊 Fate made me stumble upon your work and I like it because I love reading and your story is great, but sad to say, the gramatization will fail to hook more readers interest, I'm sure there's a lot out there who would like to read a good read. Sorry for the 'not so good comment/review' I just really like your story so I want to see more improvement for it, keep up your work I know you can do it 😘

Update please 🙏 I'm always voting for this story, I also like your other story. Always looking forward for more updates, keep up the good work 💪 stay strong.

It's a good story, please continue releasing chapters. It's always on my vote list 😘

I always vote for it and check for more released chapters everyday without missed, so please continue this story and don't drop it. I also like the MC here and the romance is slow in built up and that's a plus, I just hope it's not like any other story that the MC is always in entanglement to too many women.

I like the flow of the story, not like any transmigration story I read where everyone start as weak or have a system or magical tools to help them. And I like the character of Li, he's coo, specially whenever he uses his power. Please continue releasing new chapters and don't drop this story like everyone else. I will support you author. 🤩

mass released pretty please 🤗

I'm really looking forward when Muir is fully accepted as Qingqing's mate. And of course for Qingqing and Winston to be more intimate.

author, I just noticed that you like Sam to say this line, please refrain from doing so for it's kinda dumb/stupid, and it gives the story a lot of hole on it. 😋 first, his not that powerful and his enemy are getting stronger the more he moves to the next level, and even though he's supposed to be a genius or that he has a cheat like the tower, he can't always be hiding there isn't it? beside, you can't always put the enemy rooted to the spot for being shocked or caught off guard momentarily in every confrontation for it makes the story more predictable the more that happened, and lastly it makes the enemy stupid for they seemed to always do nothing until Sam got his revenge 😑. I just hope you make the enemy much more like a real enemy that have a line like "rid the weed from it's root to prevent it from growing" kind of thing, specially, when Sam is like saying something along the lines of "hey! kill me now or you'll regret it later when I get my revenge." Do you get what I mean? I hope you do. anyway, I'm just giving some advice, so please no offense 😉😘 after all, I believe having someone to criticize your work can make us more aware of the things that we overlook and improve more 😉

Good writing ability, I like the characters and the story, specially about Li Xueyue and Yu Zhen 🤩😍 though the chapter release is disappointing 🤔😑😣😔 and if you could can you please make Xueyue more fierce to those women who wants to steal Yu Zhen away from her, I mean, fierce in a way that at least she will not just walk away in a confrontation with a smile not even telling Xu jaqui how delusional she is by giving her a slap in the face "in a word though". Anyway I'm on full support of your story, I will always vote for it, too bad it's not in the list for energy vote if it is I'll definitely vote for it, 😉😘 please keep up the good work 😎