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NightBladeI1mthCommentedpoor Obito lol
"Yumi-sensei, I'm ready to start the challenge for the second stage," Obito expressed his eagerness to quickly complete the challenge and begin practicing Soru.- NightBladeI2mthCommented
Its a DxD?
I promised some chapters of DeathxDragon, which I plan to deliver, but I will probably do so with a long chapter close to the end of the volume. - NightBladeI6mthCommentedCh 38 Two Great Sects And One Pavilion
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I'm better in calculus...
You would pick linear algebra over calculus, right? (A/N: Existential dread coming your way) - NightBladeI7mthCommentedCh 16 The Price Of Loyalty
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To be honest, I started reading it without any expectations, but this is incredible. If it weren't for the low number of chapters, it would probably have many more readers. The story's proposal is interesting and fun, in its own way. The main character is interesting, almost being two different people, the great general and himself. Evaluation of webnovel topics: The writing isn't wonderful, but it doesn't have any major problems, overall it's well written. The author updates consistently. The development of the story is smooth, there are no major problems, except perhaps in the development of the world. The characters are well developed, they usually present valid reasons for their actions, whether good or bad. There are those characters who use the strength or fame of others to boast, which is normal in a Chinese story, but well, the government system is close to the Chinese imperial government, so it makes sense. The background environment is something that can be improved, we have little information about the world and the events that happened, especially with the protagonist and how he became stronger. I hope this gets resolved in the future considering there aren't even 10 chapters at the moment.
- NightBladeI7mthCommentedCh 13 Extermination Of The Zhang Clan
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I felt this as a Brazilian, but it's not wrong.
Kaito had a firm grasp on this point, after all, the brazilians across the world were also quite adept at it. - NightBladeI7mthCommented
In fact it is not mentioned, but the amount of tails is also related to the amount of chakra, and the more chakra the more jutsus can be used.
(A/N: "Although it's not mentioned anywhere that tailed beasts with more tails are stronger, But I will use this in my fanfic.") - NightBladeI8mthReplied to Classic_Goose
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Losing a friend was very difficult for me. We spent a lot of time together, constantly making fun of each other. But that time has come to an end. - NightBladeI9mthReplied to Exi_Nexi
because the heart has to stay in his body, this is one of the few disadvantages of his technique.
But there was only one life! - NightBladeI9mthCommentedThis paragraph has been deleted.
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Make it like Noblesse, or something like this.
The mc becomes a young warrior, then a tribe leader, then an elder, and as he becomes older, he notices that he doesn't seem to age! And we'll follow him through the ancient time until modern times. He is going to have some kind of cheat, I might give him supersoldier serum, or make him a werewolf or some other supernatural being, not to the point that he can destroy the earth or anything but strong enough that he can take on a 50-100 men on his own. - NightBladeI2yrCommentedCh 292 Pokemon master of tactics: Chapter 292
- NightBladeI2yrCommentedCh 93 Preparations (2)
- NightBladeI2yrCommentedMina looked at this unassuming mysterious boy dressed in full straw clothing with a large straw hat covering half his face. His old tattered clothes were bloodied from what seemed to be countless fights.
- NightBladeI2yrCommentedCh 138 Chapter 138: The human realm
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ART IS
Sanada said as he placed his hand on Tsunade's hair, giving her a nice head pat. - NightBladeI2yrCommented[ pufffffhahahahahahahah🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 lol Mercenary Hire Technique. Damn it is real and I even checked it two times just to see if there was any mistake in the translation]
- NightBladeI2yrCommentedCh 130 Chapter 130: Plea for help