I like this story, it's just turning out like a bunch of others and I just had such high hopes for this one... especially since he was a martial arts and combat sports fanatic. Even if it's good I can't help but feel disappointed it's not living up to expectations. : /

I have one thing to say on the ripped part. You been practicing martial arts(the real like kind) all day everyday since you were six? :P lol him being shredded makes sense. plus, it's a body tempering martial art, it makes the body grow.

He really needs to stop being stupid and go explore the depths of that cave.

....seriously? Why does everyone wanna ruin a potentially good story for stupid comedy? Just makes me not even wanna read it even though I was hoping it'd be good. I hate idiotic comedy, I loathe it. Comedy in itself is great, but idiotic comedy...ugh. Even if the story itself is like, the greatest ever, one bit of idiotic comedy completely ruins it for me. To each their own though.

Ran out of chapters on SH. Also....am I the only one who feels like everyone should know who the sand man is? And most importantly, you are awesome for naming the monkey after that movie. Completely went over my head till I saw that note though. Need to rewatch Pirates Of The Caribbean.

Stupidest most infuriating chapter in this entire story. Can he be anymore dumb? Like ****. This made me wanna punch somebody.

Seriously? Wtf author. Not alright. Not cool at all.

Ridiculously annoying and predictable. Of course riiiight before he gets the dagger. Like you couldn't be more obvious an cliche. Just irritating. Was looking forward to him snatching the dagger. This is just...annoying.

Okay this is stupid. Noah not noticing that is stupid and clearly for the sole purpose of this plot point. He should have easily noticed earlier before he started climbing the temple or turned off his Observent (too lazy right now to check if i spelled that one right.) Skill what was happening. Not like it only started happening after he turned off his skill.

Also, this novel has the single most retarded line i have ever seen in a novel. 'He didn't understand why that world couldn't accept software to invade their privacy when many people on blue star accept that willingly' Like wtf? Are you joking? Who the hell in their right mind would knowingly and willingly do that? And also, that's mostly illegal in the first damn place! Wtf.

That would waste the fruit. He'd lose stats again when he splits a fifth time and has no guaranteed way to recover them, even if maybe, splitting the fifth time would help with that, that's still not a smart choice, who would gamble that they'd magically be able to get the stats they lost back? Better to split all at once and be able to use the item and get as many stats back at once as he can than placing all his bets on something that may or may not happen, and if it doesn't he'll be drastically weaker. Just not a good choice at all.

I don't mind him acting like he's weaker, i get that to a point, but, FORFEITING the fight? Unacceptable. Can't even describe how much it goes against my nature.

He threw the match? Are you joking? I can't even begin to describe how infuriating that is.

And those freaking ridiculous restraints he put on himself are absurd. There's no reason one element has to be earth. He could sell the tome for tunnel precisely because he doesn't HAVE the earth element is what most would think. Like what the heck. Limiting cast times okay, hiding lack of cooldown for more basic spells...just seems stupid. If anything just take a little longer to cast, 1, maybe 2 or 3 seconds. Dual casting...meh.

I swear he better not throw the fight. It's infuriating when authors write that stuff. He can hide his strength without losing like a little- Ahem. Anyway, point is, there's utterly no reason to throw the fight.

I mean, this is such a super good story. And i really like this type of story. It's really well written an good so i try not to nitpick, just, stuff like this annoys me immensely.

Can't believe you signed one of the toxic contracts from webnovel.

Oh Jackal is so definitely a plant by that Smirk guy.

Severe irritation and aggravation caused by the chapter.

....This was chosen over Era Of The God's?